Re: a comment on You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Skamper 202.6.130.1	25-Jun-07/4:38 PM
I'm sure just the thought that there is one out there will be thanks enough for both of them. Oh! what was that? Little Johnny Howard wants his share of the thanks...he's been playing with the big boys too you know!
Re: a comment on You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Skamper 202.6.130.1	25-Jun-07/4:34 PM
easiest thing I've ever written...probably got all the lingo wrong...(even using the word lingo is wrong), would have been fun too if they hadn't of wound me up so much...
Re: The Old Soldier by Skamper	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.242.189	25-Jun-07/12:49 PM
I liked the bit about squeezing your buttocks. It shows you that a gay old soldier is always up for a bit after Lights Out in the barracks.
Re: You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.242.189	25-Jun-07/12:47 PM
This has a certain negroid rapper verissimilitude to it. Groovy and cool. But loathsome.
Re: The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove	Skamper 202.6.132.165	25-Jun-07/11:15 AM
what did she call it
Re: a comment on Foie Gras by Christof	Christof 62.121.23.56	25-Jun-07/1:38 AM
The 'funnel' is my own term, glad you like it! And the geese are referring back to the title - they are the telesales people being filled up until they burst, like geese fattened up to make pate de foie gras.
Re: You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:39 PM
Only the last line is good. I would like to see an armless Iraqi child on worldwide TV thanking Bush & Blair for their kind bombs. May God bugger both of them.
Re: Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:31 PM
I just re-read this. It is still the funniest thing sinc that jew Christ got nailed up. I'll try to rate it 10 again but what the fuck.
Re: American Idle by wilco	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:29 PM
A bit technical. Basically I haven't the first fucking idea what you are talking about. Cubs? Sputtered? 1-40? Talk about provincial.......................
Re: Bitter by Ranger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:27 PM
Not very good, but I have read worse.
Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:25 PM
Totally fabbo wabbo!
Re: a comment on The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:24 PM
I can't seem to be able to vote this 10/10! What's wrong? Everyone else votes their own rubbisbh 10/10! Why can't I? It's discrimination because my twat smells bad.
Re: turd cutter by Count Flatula	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:22 PM
A eork of genius. A steamer indeed. I shall have to give this 0/10 because it deserves to be read more.
Re: The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.207.35	23-Jun-07/4:21 PM
This is a great poem! 10 out of 10!
Re: You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Dovina 208.190.252.149	23-Jun-07/4:03 PM
Sounds like a rap with double and triple negatives to which I'm not hip. Has a nice sound to it though.
Re: You Don't Not Know No Shit by Skamper	Skamper 202.6.129.125	23-Jun-07/10:02 AM
Just a heads up - I wrote this a few years ago one lunch time while watching a group of white-middle-class Aussie kids actin' all ghetto.
Re: a comment on Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	Dovina 71.158.212.23	23-Jun-07/4:16 AM
Thanks, but I didn’t mean to be arrogant.
Re: a comment on Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	Dovina 71.158.212.23	23-Jun-07/4:16 AM
Yeah, the ending is a bit too neat; I’m an imperfectionist too. Will think on it. Thanks.
Re: Fourty Caliber Thirty Pack by drnick	Dovina 71.158.212.23	23-Jun-07/4:13 AM
The repeated lines: I sit alone in my apartment Looking, hoping, praying inside someone's American dream could be a wrap-up verse or something.
Re: a comment on Tirade of a Venetian Ghost by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 71.229.128.83	22-Jun-07/11:56 PM
The title refers to Shakespeare as he wrote much about Venice.