sliver
on Down Drown by LintyWeenis
4 Sep 2004, 11:16 AM
Waiting for you to vote on something. Anything. Then I'll give you a vote on this.
Did he have to die?
GREAT!!
sliver
replying on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Sep 2004, 9:03 AM
YES!! Very much so. Read my poem The Message(revised).
That is my attempt to discribe camping in these beautiful rocky mountains. Kinda.I got sidetracked.
Well written, this deserves a place somewhere above all the others, at least for a time. I believe you find peace in a chapel because your soul, which makes you who you are, feels more at home there than in this chaotic world. Just a thought.
really really cool
Druid? I've always been entranced by the idea of Stonehenge, So, my thoughts exactly.
Keep fighting. It's all about how you deal with the situations you are presented with in life. And, no matter how bad it is, it's never worth suicide!
I don't think he's lost, just misplaced. If he holds the key to your freedom, you are going with him.
I think you should sleep on this and hit it again, it begs for more.
That story should never end, then what would us simple poets write about?
Hey Sasha, long time. I really enjoyed this one, Brings memories to mind that almost make me cry. Just what I needed after last night. Thanks.
Yeah, and I also managed to leave an anonymous comment. I thought that was impossible.
Like a nigger lipped joint rolled by a blind pariah.
Dude, you said "motherfucker" with pinache, sweet.
nice poem!
<Begin simile>
<Shoehorne in as many ill-conceived war references as possible>
<Continue for a bit longer>
<Oh wait, got another one>
<There we go>
<Finish>
Why don't you at least make the most rudimentary effort to earn your fucking pseudo-professor's salary by reading a couple of books concerning your supposed expert subject matter, motherfucker?
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