Re: a comment on Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	colin douglas's arse 194.154.22.38	14-Aug-07/8:08 AM
I get reely pised off with Skilton pretending to be me and sayin rude things & giving me a bad naim. At least im not as rude as he is. This is the real Colin Douglas talking out his arse as usual. Mr C has got it right though.
Re: Crotchety Old Geezer by Dovina	INTRANSIT 65.29.52.204	14-Aug-07/8:03 AM
That he does. That he does.
Re: a comment on Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	some deleted user 80.225.213.211	13-Aug-07/12:33 PM
Well well well they say you are only a few feet away from a rat and here is the biggest rattus horriblus of the lot edna fuckwit sweetlove. what a nasty little shyte you are! oh yes i am rude and glad of it with tghe scum that i deal with its a bonus. I don't give a fuck wat you think so take your piece of garbage and stick it where the sun don't shine you miserable excuse for wank bread.
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	richa 81.179.138.61	13-Aug-07/12:03 PM
You would have to be this poem's mother to call it satire of the highest order.
Re: a comment on broken bottles by richa	richa 81.179.138.61	13-Aug-07/10:46 AM
There is something peculiarly uninteresting about being told what an observer can not see.
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.248.120	13-Aug-07/9:11 AM
You must be REALLY thick not to understand this is satire of the highest order! Change your rating from O to 10 and help this gem up the ladder to fucking glory!
Re: broken bottles by richa	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.248.120	13-Aug-07/9:07 AM
I really cannot see this is very good and I dislike the excessive use of exclamation marks.
Re: a comment on Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.248.120	13-Aug-07/9:05 AM
Now let me see. I refer to the IPS check on this website and I find that it states all the following IP numbers are linked... 80.225.105.112 80.225.105.228 80.225.107.17 80.225.112.192 80.225.114.137 80.225.123.186 80.225.133.71 80.225.135.118 80.225.140.107 80.225.144.139 80.225.147.196 80.225.167.125 80.225.187.195 80.225.189.229 80.225.194.189 80.225.200.116 80.225.218.222 80.225.218.235 80.225.221.142 80.225.99.79 AND furthermore, they are linked to the names of Colin Skilton and Dr Peter Douglas. And we know that "Colin Douglas" is also "Colin Skilton" as it says so above. So now that is all totally clear. I personally think the outburst above is rather rude but then Mr Douglas is renowned for his rudeness. Maybe that is what he got his alleged "doctorate" for: D.R. = Doctor of Rudeness! PS I think the poem is rather rude as well.
Re: Prescription of Pain by Miggy	Dental Panic 84.27.244.4	10-Aug-07/1:33 PM
yeah, chirp is great. Sounds like Bush talkin' bout Yurp.
Re: Under the rain by Prince of Void	Dovina 67.118.32.133	8-Aug-07/7:53 PM
One of your best.
Re: a comment on Another Date by Dovina	Dovina 67.118.32.133	8-Aug-07/7:51 PM
Verse 1.
Re: Aeuphoria by MacFrantic	dclark 67.140.205.248	8-Aug-07/7:41 PM
maybe change thunder to rumble, that rhymes to simple, stick with the vowels they drag it out better, ya know?
Re: Sadist by PoetryIsDead	dclark 67.140.205.248	8-Aug-07/7:29 PM
reminds me of sex, maybe? a little brutal ;)
Re: Caprice by PoetryIsDead	dclark 67.140.205.248	8-Aug-07/7:28 PM
i don't get the last line either, but like you said it makes since to you, and thats all that really matters in actuality. i like how i can read it smoothly without to much rhyming and not to little, but i don't like rhyming words like smile and mile, but thats all up to you, i just stick with more of the vowels sounding out the same at the end of lines, or sometimes without.
Re: Sunset Beach by amanda_dcosta	pete 62.56.62.221	8-Aug-07/4:45 PM
puh..leeze
Re: Prescription of Pain by Miggy	pete 62.56.62.221	8-Aug-07/4:40 PM
a point for "chirp"
Re: I love you by jerzeygirl22	pete 62.56.62.221	8-Aug-07/4:36 PM
the first stanza here swings along real nice but then the poetry (not necessarily the poetic thoughts) seems to dry up.try the rest using the meter of that ... maybe even let the first stanza stand by itself ... the fewer words, the more a poem can say .:-)
Re: Another Date by Dovina	Prince of Void 80.71.122.138	8-Aug-07/12:16 PM
Well we are all dreamers Looking for what we dreamed yesterday But we don’t know We drag them all through tomorrows Where the reality seems too real The worst thing is we can't reach Those unreachable dreams Our passions never stop us That last in tears of our uncertainty Why we couldn’t...How it could happen The destiny became stranger than our lives We live with things unsaid and unsound Rising and falling down Here in our hearts The ocean has no depth No end ....no destination We are wandering along our dreams Our roads ...our days... But the point is you must devote yourself for someone or some reasons I know it's hard...or maybe impossible Devotions give your choices how you can change One day impossible is possible There are so many ways to go You can discover on your own Can I ask you? What are important things you like about a man?
Re: To a Grunting Man on the Train by Christof	Ranger 86.153.11.37	7-Aug-07/1:52 AM
Mostly marvellous, the rhythm reminds me of the clicking of a train except for the middle of stanza two where it becomes a bit disjointed. I didn't see any need for the backstage pass, but the rest is grand.
Re: a comment on Another Date by Dovina	pete 62.56.126.204	6-Aug-07/4:57 PM
god ..... everyboy's crap tonight ..... or is it me? .... will go and rest awhile ..:-)