-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on A Girlâs Climax by Dovina
26 Oct 2004, 4:06 PM
NOT AS EXCELLENT AS YOUR CATCH PHRASES THAT'S FOR SURE!!!!111
6 words: He's just not that into you.
sorry I was looking for a place to drop that new catch phrase. I think your poetry's excellent.
lol. Never engage a man in his own game. I might learn.
Robed in stench and labour pains
O'er the toilet bowl she strains.
Wretched wails, and glist'ning brow:
OH GOOD LORD PLEASE END IT NOW!
And callously she leaves the boothe
Writhing in a swollen truth.
Left behind to be reviled:
A CATACLYSMIC BROWNIAN CHILD!
Found and left as was
And now I know the cause
No respect for decency laws
âTwas DA not Santa Clause
I am ashamed. Ashamed of you. You who have left
an unspeakable undrinkable
in the porcelain ranks
of Armitage Shanks.
It's always the one with a mouthful of accusations. flushed out. You should be ashamed.
You're foreign.
A gentleman would have used http://tinyurl.com
yeah well you shouldnt of done you're massive stool there in the first place no wonder the mctoilet went tits-up.
You must be on Ramamamadan, then. Don't bother. Muslim women don't have souls. That's definitely, definitely true.
I am out of shape. Lack of groceries has suppressed my masochism. Somewhat.
Intensely lewd, particularly the bit where you scoff your grandmother's remains.
i would suggest "new" in place of "anew"
also, "fall" in place of "falter"
a 10 anyway
a wicked and inspired jug solo
comment by Richard E. Watley
just beautiful
You make some great points Ed. It was inspired by some women I knew and I needed to make it metaphoric so as not to insult them. How many women and even men do we see fighting so desperately to maintain their beauty in vain.
It is one of my more sappier pieces. You guys give great critiques that an artist can truely learn from.
a mugged runner?
Well itâs like this: The bowl was yucky til this customer decided to lift the lid. The chain had slipped off its handle as chains do, and he slipped it back on. Then he found a plunger and took care of the yuck. I could have done that, but didnât want to soil my hands. What better definition of a good man can you find?