my mom only has one

Did'nt mean any harm man.

To your comment on my brother poem is about our mother It wasn't meant to be taken that way. It was about our mother trying to raise six kids before she died. My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov. he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems Felicia

I agree with Dovina. good poem work on it a little more

At least you're not assuming we know the setting this time. This is good. Verses 5,6 and 7 need some opening transition, I think.

Good. Line 2 - "And rest" Ling 3 - "descending."

So your goodbye was not final. We have two theories here on Poemranker: 1. Poets, who are dim, write nonsense. 2. Poets who are dim write nonsense. I see -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. adheres to both. Which do you prefer?

It's always a time for celebration, the day you finally become housebroken. For what you once thought would suddenly flee, is now under firm command. You've learned to let go, my son. It's a lesson that will stay with you for many years to come, until, of course, you become an elderly. Here's to life, love, and the unpampered pursuit of happiness. Welcome to The Rutherford Club.

I found this poeme incredibly hurtful. My mother actually is handicapped, and when I see people like you trivialising something that is a serious problem for many real people, it makes me angry and sad. <no vote>

I can dig it doc.-10-

Not bad bro.-8-