-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on "oh" by fevriere
23 Dec 2004, 10:42 AM
I don't not dislike it.
Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
Neither am I a gayu nor an Islam. I am a HINDU and a heterosexual. (I thought the latter was pretty evident in my poems.)
You're quite right. I think it needs going over with a ruler.
Considering the context, I think we have to assume the deer is in the throes of love, menopause, or both.
I just finished checking out your homepage. I was surprised to see that you're a male. On a similar note, I was surprised today to learn that Islams have Gays like other places, and they act like Gays in other places do.
PLAGIARISM ALERT PLAGIARISM ALERT PLAGIARISM ALERT
http://www.netacc.net/~gradda/lighter4.h tml
see under "From Susan Tanguy"
Having a handicapped father I can tolerate. But plagiarism? Now that's another matter.
For the love of Christ learn how to click on the 'Reply' button.
Happy Holidays to you, my good sir!!
Oh okay, I'm sorry, god what was I thinking?
Will you forgive me?
Why don't you just drop the arrogance?? People have the right to comment what they think?? I didn't say your poem SUCKS. I liked it just fine, but I though it could have been improved. Anything wrong witrh improvements???
Isn't this what the comment box is for.. To leave your honest views?? I am not here to please your vanity or prick it either. I just told you what I honestly thought to be true. And besides, I have read much classier villanelles. I'd never accept it if you say PERHAPS and DRIPS are perfect rhymes.
Come and tear my work apart. I'd appreciate it. But please stop taking out your spite on me. I am here to improve my poetry,not to share kick ass poems.
Not bad!! But what does AGAINS mean??
What's classy? Just curious...
Raping haikus with your puberty
doused ideas about what poetry
Means to a 17 year old?
Perhaps, straddling over
the mouth of Freeverse
And pinching a loaf of love?
Please, take your mediocrity
to the showers. Everyone knows
A villanelle is a purposely forced
Rhyming couplet, that's the point
You tit. My extremely DEEP poem
happens to have DEEPER meanings
Like Sodomy, war, and biscuits.
Good Evening,
Sincerely,
-=Horus8_Of_The_Eights=-
Retribution, you asswagon.
Sounds like that neeger wants a leetle white wheestle.
"Absolute chestnut!!" I could not best this comment, so here it is again. (For some reason every time I read it, I burst).