Crakyamuni
on You by sk8boardandpoems
3 Jan 2005, 3:22 PM
Have you met crystal lane swift?
To answer your first question: I did. I sang them because I was taught, and I still think my parents were right to teach them. They said their world was going to the dogs, and it wasn't near as bad as mine in regard to the moral issues they and you are complaining about. Still I sing Peace on Earth, Good Will to Men, because it's right and they were right and you are right if you don't lose faith. UNTIL THEN.
Couldnât resist. I must knuckle down and become less cheesy.
It is a very simple example of math indeed, but thatâs the point. If he touted something he could not fully believe, then he would always have a question behind his words, the nagging uncertainty. He had no doubt in his belief and could preach with confidence.
Itâs one of the more dangerous things to say, but zodiac is right.
Thatâs no excuse! Stand in the corner until itâs done.
Thanks, and thatâs a better way to write the equation, given a stiffly text-only format.
This reminded me of Gacy. With the whole Killing Kids and being a clown thing. I liked it!
nice . . . (i gave it an 8)
-mega
oh my that is extremely difficult . . . like choosing a favorite sonnet by shakespeare . . . i do not know there are so many gems in his writings, i could send you a list of favorite poems perhaps . . .
i suppose if i had to choose, the last two lines, of this one poem, (this title is not coming to mind as of current) go:
"i'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach 1000 stars how not to dance"
but all in all, i love a great deal of his work . . .
-mega
i like this . . . u creat vivid images
There is quite a bit there. I'd like to see some stanza breaks.
And as one example, you tell me "my old feeble body" - I rather get that from the rest, or should.
Telling me the same thing several times in standard ways, is not nearly as effective as telling me once - but in a memorable way.
Having said that, I think this is a notch or so above average; some good vocab. It could pretty easily be more - might even be a two or more poems in here.
Bhaskaryya
on Sitting in a damp refrigerator box, wondering (ODE) Basque by zodiac
3 Jan 2005, 5:55 AM
How is that a Glosa?? Besides, I submitted one!!