Beyond_Dreams
on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 9:04 PM
I hate "now you lay in the flame". And whats so shamefull about hugging the toilet, i've done that a million times gotten up wiped my mouth and drank some more. I'm proud of my drinking binges!
Bravo, Bravo!!!
Maybe they should award me the apathy harness.
DreamerSupreme
replying on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
31 Jan 2005, 8:28 PM
I don't get all immature and dot the voter-sphere with 0's as a method of retaliation.
Only Darkie gets the occasional single senseless zero from me when I can't contain the loathing, but he's my lifelong nemesis, and theres no room for another.
In case my last comment was mistaken for sarcasm, it was sincere.
Here do you think this is better
I hope it gets your panties wetter
This may come as quite a shock
I am a chick therefor I have no cock!
No reason to kiss ass here. Most people do it because the 'ranker is a "I'll scratch your back, you scratch mine" society. I'll give you a ten you give me one, wink wink. I used to simply not vote on a poem if I was going to give less thatn a seven because if you piss someone off they;ll give you 30 anonymous 0's. Now, however, I just don't care. I'm giving what I think it deserves and fuck you if you want to give me a 0. Anyway, this one wasn't bad. I think maybe it should go under 'other' but it matters not, I guess.
Naturally, you are correct.
About your balls popping off. Again.
SupremeDreamer
replying on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
31 Jan 2005, 6:50 PM
Your deflated tits have just dribbled the last drop of sour milk. A cow so British that it can't even be labelled "Beef".
You fuckin wilted boob.
"It's good fun getting people all defensive" --
Yes! we make 'm stew, make 'm cry, make 'm pensive
but not you -- you just sputter
and endlessly mutter
how little it means to you when rankers the tens give.
Rated R for language and explicit content.
An arrogant aside, beautifully stunning.
&
Your as large as life, written to be.
I'd rewrite that to:
Rated R for language and explicit content-- (or ;)
arrogance aside, absolutely stunning.
&
You're larger than life, written to be.
Beautifully stunning is just redundant, and it's always good to clarify the use of a contraction ole comrade.
That said, have a hearty nine.
What is this amassed hubris of catch phrases and vague nonsense? An expression of chaos?
Even anarchy has a hint of form, a subtle rational, a sense of direction. When will you grasp that concept?
What kind of rejoinder is that?
Are you saying your groin's, er, less protruding than flat?
For me there's no sport
In such a lousy retort
I enjoin you, do better than that
The beginning is cliche, in other words, and can be noted in countless other pieces.
It's not exactly plagiarising, but zodiac likes to get the rankerfolk all rawled up... It's good fun, getting people all defensive... anyway, you can do better than that.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
31 Jan 2005, 6:14 PM
"Maybe that'll give you more variety when feeling the urge to say 'your stupid' in an intentionally 'baffling' way so as to allow your victim to offer emphasis to your sentiments."
What a parpingly excellent sentence!
SupremeDreamer
on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
31 Jan 2005, 6:05 PM
Sure is more creative and solid than the usual--
"I hate you, you bastard, stabbed me in the heart, I'm stronger, don't need you, you'll regret dumping or cheating on me, blarg, blarg, etc, etc."
I almost gave up the hope that somebody would put some thought into an "uprooting" poem.
Blessed with eight.
SupremeDreamer
replying on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
31 Jan 2005, 5:52 PM
Dunce, Dimwit, Dullard, Half-wit, Nit-wit, Twit, Changeling, Cretin, Simpleton, Fool, Idiot, Imbecile, Moron, Dolt, Pudden-head, Fuddy-duddy, Gasbag, Windbag, Nudnik, Platitudinarian (for your thesaurophilac moments), Fuckhead, Shithead, Pinhead, Blockhead, Bonehead, Knucklehead, Loggerhead, Lunkhead, Muttonhead, Dunderhead, Numskull, Lame, Lamer, Boob, Doofus, Dope, Dumb-bell, Dummy, Muggins, Nincompoop, Idiot Savant, Ninny, Sap, Scatterbrain, Sheepling, Underling, Tomfool, Subnormal, Twerp, Jack-ass, Fag, Stupid, Wally, Bow'ls
and finally, (*whooo*) RETARD.
Maybe that'll give you more variety when feeling the urge to say "your stupid" in an intentionally "baffling" way so as to allow your victim to offer emphasis to your sentiments.
Wally? You fuckin homo.
Something about this I like. Not sure what it is.
Here's a girly with multiple letters,
in her name, scorifying her "betters".
But of course she's just jealous,
she'd love having some fellas --
if she'd only the bits to go get hers!
Not bad as a Triolet. I usually dislike using thee and lest but but it seems to work ok here.
considering this poem has nothing to do w/ a man you have to be referring to yourself