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wilco replying on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000 10 Feb 2005, 4:08 PM
Like a good little boy, I only pray when I REALLY, REALLY want something from the big guy.
wilco on Separation by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 4:04 PM
As I've said before, I'm not a big fan of the Bible poems. This is mainly because I am wholly uneducated regarding Christianity, and mainly because what I have learned about it is utter bollocks. Due to my limited knowledge of the subject matter, I'll hold my vote.
wilco replying on Separation by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 4:02 PM
are you that thick? I didn't think you were.
7!3 on A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle 10 Feb 2005, 3:46 PM
excellent! lol
Shuushin replying on Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 10 Feb 2005, 2:11 PM
I think I've been pretty specific here on what needs to be fixed. Just keep writing and strive to have a reason for every word you put down on the paper.
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* replying on "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 10 Feb 2005, 1:59 PM
Thank-you SupremeDreamer I just don't know how to post it as a pimple now that it is submitted without deleting the comments..........Lindsey...
*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* replying on Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*. 10 Feb 2005, 1:46 PM
Thanx a lot I really appreciate the comments (good or bad) although I wish people could tll me what I do worng in them so I can fix them because apparently my poems suck ass but you know how it goes peace out ....Lindsey....
Dovina replying on Goodbye by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 1:14 PM
Oh, I can fight! What, your father can't? Math teacher, huh?
al-naafiysh on Goodbye by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 11:02 AM
What! You can"t fight no more Like my father? Your friend the math teacher.
al-naafiysh replying on Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh 10 Feb 2005, 8:18 AM
Have you ever been married before? The reason I say my goal is..." in verse is,because at first it was wonderful, after that he became m.f. to live with, but I did'nt want to leave because I thought he would change. I wanted my marriage to be like my father and mother's. I know no marriage has the perfect union,and the last verse is reality for some women. you give your all and all, and still get hurt. Dont get me wrong it happen's both ways. Your friend the math teacher.
Dovina on A Metahaiku by dbond 10 Feb 2005, 8:06 AM
What's kigo?
Dovina on Beating heart by celticskatermatt1 10 Feb 2005, 8:04 AM
Good up through line 3, except for spelling. After that it gets trite.
Dovina on The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined 10 Feb 2005, 7:56 AM
You're being imbic with a myth-like tale. But in a few places you sacrifice clarity for it. In Line 6, I thought "was" is distracting. And if being imbic is important, then why the lapse in Veres 3. Line 3? Like it.
7!3 on The Tree by Joe-joe 10 Feb 2005, 5:55 AM
nice :)!
7!3 on charred pixels by FreeFormFixation 10 Feb 2005, 5:44 AM
not bad.
7!3 on Recess by horus8 10 Feb 2005, 5:38 AM
nice :)
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000 10 Feb 2005, 3:58 AM
Some people never pray. They must have no sense of morality.
Caducus replying on Matthew's Bastard by Caducus 10 Feb 2005, 1:30 AM
With a name like Doug who the fuck are you to try and leave a wisecrack? Knob jockey.
zodiac replying on Separation by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 1:26 AM
re: "You missed completely that this is a story, not a didactic presentation of grand statements." We tend to do that with your poems. That is an honest and apt criticism. So there. And for that matter, what do you mean by "honest and apt" criticism anyway?
zodiac replying on Separation by Dovina 10 Feb 2005, 1:06 AM
Is Dovina really hypatia? If so, I'm flabbergasted. And truly sorry.