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MarchingMan56 replying on Hide by MarchingMan56 24 Feb 2005, 5:16 PM
No. I don't understand what you mean. I CONFUSED!!!
horus8 replying on Hide by MarchingMan56 24 Feb 2005, 3:50 PM
Is that a trick question?
MarchingMan56 replying on Hide by MarchingMan56 24 Feb 2005, 3:36 PM
What's that supposed to mean???
Dovina on They that do not scream by INTRANSIT 24 Feb 2005, 1:04 PM
Yeah, good point. Ignore the screaming malcontents with their petty little gripes and open the window for the mantis.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom 24 Feb 2005, 10:57 AM
Yeah, the entire second stanza is great.
Stephen Robins replying on Into the Wreckage by zodiac 24 Feb 2005, 8:44 AM
What?
Stephen Robins replying on Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04 24 Feb 2005, 8:41 AM
You can be such a bitch.
Dovina on Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04 24 Feb 2005, 8:36 AM
Okay you have wounds, but that's about all it says. Fancy spacing and repetition cannot make it better.
Dovina on The End of the Affair by jessicazee 24 Feb 2005, 8:34 AM
Scratch the first line. Line break after "teeth." I like this a lot!
Dovina on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom 24 Feb 2005, 8:19 AM
These coded interactions are interesting for riddle and bravery to risk discovery. Among the angst though are a few good lines - "Fact wrapped around fiction" because it's the opposite of the usual fiction wrapped around fact.
Stephen Robins replying on Hunger by Dovina 24 Feb 2005, 7:14 AM
I imagine they droop below her pubes, which isn't hard as they stretch as high as her chin.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom 24 Feb 2005, 3:14 AM
Really, what good have my words done the for starving children in Africa. Until the previous sentence nothing, and even then, they merely point out the existance of starving children in Africa. Our words mean what we want them to mean, and nothing more, nothing less. In this case, nothing at all. <3 Jason
Crakyamuni on Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 23 Feb 2005, 7:58 PM
Honestly I'm illiterate, but goddamn, this was an inspiration. I have never read anything as good on this site. This may be an insult to you blue bloods, but I'm in love with this poem.
Crakyamuni on Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 23 Feb 2005, 7:55 PM
That was insane.
Crakyamuni on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom 23 Feb 2005, 7:51 PM
A sense of "doom" here. I like that. Our words mean everything, especially "mine". Paint it black and "red", and add a bunny with a snake body.
Dreammaker1024 on Into the Wreckage by zodiac 23 Feb 2005, 5:28 PM
I enjoyed it, More than I you know. There are ways I would like to explain what I think of it to u, but I doubt they would do justice. So I'll leave it at this; beyond mere idea.
Dreammaker1024 replying on Mistress of Dreams by Dreammaker1024 23 Feb 2005, 5:20 PM
The first three verses are about the 3 things in my life that I adore and that I let into "me". So in their palms they hold me, they hold everything that I feel, think, know.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Hunger by Dovina 23 Feb 2005, 4:16 PM
Are your breasts floppy?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 23 Feb 2005, 4:11 PM
My favourite bit is "Geffen passed around a wooden box full of drugs."
horus8 on Hide by MarchingMan56 23 Feb 2005, 2:14 PM
The way you re-write cliche is... Cliche.