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Mistress of Dreams (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
You look at me with such knowing eyes, Deep into my soul you gaze. Naked before you mine body is yours, Deep into my soul you gaze. Dreammaker you are. Melodious notes sway me into a relaxing beautiful, Sweetly my soul it has swept away. Yearning for its breeze of touch on my mental state, Sweetly my soul it has swept away. Dreammaker it has become. Flowing unto transcript freely bound, My soul it mirrors. Colorfully it takes my deepest word and portrays, My soul it mirrors. Dreammaker only it knows. In their palms they hold my depth, In me have I opened my soul. Allowing their peering eyes though I am mine own mistress, In me have I opened my soul. Dreammaker of myself am I.

Up the ladder: Chasing Droplets
Down the ladder: in you

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8646
Posted: February 22, 2005 11:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 22, 2005 11:38 PM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.118.14.17 | 23-Feb-05/3:26 AM | Reply
Could you explain the line "In their palms they hold my depth"?
[n/a] Dreammaker1024 @ 198.146.102.83 > zodiac | 23-Feb-05/5:20 PM | Reply
The first three verses are about the 3 things in my life that I adore and that I let into "me". So in their palms they hold me, they hold everything that I feel, think, know.
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