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a long drive on an empty mind (Free verse) by caffrey
Deatherton to mold city and back
Eye wonderment incarnate
Eye candy repeating
losing its sweet
salting my swollen tongue
200 miles of little voices
little people
bad reception
contrived grandiose ideas
nothing at all
A tiny man in the tire tread screams Irish drinking songs
I canât hear him through
The rumble of absent thought
My chattering gears of unchallenged ideas
I canât hear him through the grinding of my metal teeth Addictive and
bored
a bad combination
Not today
maybe tomorrow
Okay just this once
None too late
I have arrived
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8649
Posted: March 22, 2004 11:01 PM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2004 11:01 PM PST
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