edpeterson
replying on wishes by the_poetess
9 Mar 2005, 11:19 AM
to truly refuse to accept my last comment would be to not reply to it. you replied. this act implies acceptance. You, in light of this overwhelming evidence, DO accept my comment.
you are swelling nicely in your stew, which simmers fancifully around your browne sides. you are almost ready. I am beginning to salivate at the prosepect of having a nibble.
you are a close minded judgemental person from what i see. So quick to assume your high up on the ladder... well i begg to differ and i refuse to accept your last comment.
I am not incompetant, i lack much schooling yes, but to jump to incompetant, sheesh.
so i will repeat what i stated in my last comment, sad, so very sad.
~Autumn
YOu are a dumpling that lives in the fetid stew of your own incompetence.
Chubby_chaser
ahh you incorrectly imply that i live in the box ;). never my friend NEVER!
As for the robots, like hell!
free will must be honored for thos whom choose to find comfort in the box, sad but true.
And have you really acomplished anything in live if you have never put forth the effort?
ahh the world is over runn with heartlessness, a poem that holds a fraction of events that occur daily, and then others sit by and judge without understanding.
so sad.
~Autumn
Rainbow_chaser
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
9 Mar 2005, 8:20 AM
well im not sure what to say here, its a well writen poem, hats off to that. can say im supper big on the shallowness i felt while reading this one tho.. i still say 8 for the lay out and poem.
~Autumn
i think this little poem is very sweet, and holds much truth. thank you for sharing.
blessings
~Autumn
NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream!
Give it to me!
do you think that the poems written by CLS are good?
one pause to mimic....
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
no. portentous is the adj form. portentously would be the adv form.
edpeterson
replying on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
9 Mar 2005, 7:12 AM
wait a minute. I had no idea you were trying to pass this off as a poeme. -10-
Portly is obviously not what he meant! Notice that obviously is from an noun/adjective. And, yes, portent can be an adjective, as if it makes a diddly difference.
my email address is on my home page
Oviously, it was not on your merits. Did you look at their voting records? They didn't have time to even read your poems before voting. Do you know these idiots?