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Deja-Vu (Free verse) by Rainbow_chaser when i met you for the first time,
I relized i had always known you.
when i kissed you for the first time,
I relized i had always loved you.
Up the ladder:
a goblet of divine wine brings me dreams
Down the ladder:
Pain
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Posted: March 9, 2005 8:11 AM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2005 11:09 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9587 Comments:
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.249
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9-Mar-05/9:49 AM
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Chubby_chaser
simple, and the title adds some piece of elegance to it; but it's something that's been said a million times, and likely precisely like this at least a dozen, just from the common-ness of the words going together in the manner you used. ((though google would say these words had not yet been inscribed in the collective consciousness of the internet))
p.s. relized -> realized
This is exactly how I was going to respond.
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