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Deja-Vu (Free verse) by Rainbow_chaser

when i met you for the first time, I relized i had always known you. when i kissed you for the first time, I relized i had always loved you.

nentwined 9-Mar-05/12:23 PM
simple, and the title adds some piece of elegance to it; but it's something that's been said a million times, and likely precisely like this at least a dozen, just from the common-ness of the words going together in the manner you used. ((though google would say these words had not yet been inscribed in the collective consciousness of the internet))

p.s. relized -> realized




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