Dovina
replying on Reasonably Good by Dovina
29 Mar 2005, 10:39 AM
I can't think of a more stultifyingly colossal cloud to disappear on then with my long-time friend and lover, -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
Has my silky talk offended your sensibilities? Then you have missed the obvious underlying meaning in lines like âtheyâll call you back to repeat.â
Six weeks of piano lessons were enough to send me back to the sand box.
Yep, but love takes work and time.
If you two aren't careful you will disappear in a colossal cloud of stultified guff.
Not forgetting Cholmondeley-Belvoir,
Who smites them with his golden retriever;
Or that Cad, Hesketh-Horace,
who prefers to bite of their clitoris.
Too much flummery.
You know damn well daddy did'nt write this shit.
He need to put his foot up your ass so far until
you feel the moisture off his kneecap.
Hello Dovina hope you're doing fine.
I love the poem, because I wanted to be a pro. musician
before I became a math teacher. trying to play the piano was enough for me.
D. that's my youngest son he's a music major.
I like the poem.
I'd almost promise, I've heard this story before. Only you did it with much better images.
And a good one. I'll keep that in mind when I tackle a rewrite.
<3 Jason
Nice. Tho i think These words that make the next more broken might work better. Just a thought.
Not entirely sure of what you mean... I mean, I simply meant that a waitress walked up to the barman and and asked him to get a bottle of zin, a scene i had observed several times while hanging out with a friend of mine who worked at a crappy bar. If anything, I kinda meant the emphasis to be on the waitress noting that there was nothing in the glass, but serving it anyway because it was not her place to question what other people choose to consume. Maybe I should reread with your question in mind...
its so romanic i've never read such great work
Gotta love music.
You've got a good idea for a poem here, but it appears following too closely to the truth of the event. To tell the truth, you have to lie sometimes. To relate a thing, you have to change it.
Glad you like the dayum thang I did. If only I knew what I've done.
"God is not responsible for all things, but for good things only. Causes for evil must be sought elsewhere. To present God as the author of evil is suicidal, ruinous, impious." - The Republic
D. luv the flo, keep doin' the dayum thang sugga.