*10* Take the time to spell check.

Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*

Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*

What is this about? Your sister's period? Whatever. *6*

Too choppy and distracting, possibly too long. Now, the positives........... uhh, *7*

Like it a lot and that is that *9*

Good, except for the part about a lazy eye. *9* P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.

Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*

not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*

Very, very well done. I'd applaud but..you know. Take my word for it. *10*

My range of emotion *10* *8* *6* *9* *2* *7*

Absolutely wonderful put-you-in-your-place piece *9*

Cigarettes kill, but those annoying bastards who go around telling people not to kill themselves is worse. If you feel like smoking your blackened lungs out, be my guest. Oh, *8*

The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!

The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!

If you are being stabbed while this is being written, then I vote it as the greatest poem submitted to a peer-style internet poem voting community/chatroom ever! But since you probably aren't, (being stabbed that is) I shall remain disappointed. *7*

Not average... *5.1 or 4.9*

Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*

Good idea... i myself like vagueness a lot. *8*

This poem is really nice. It is worded so well. I love it.