Bachus
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
23 Sep 2004, 1:36 PM
The Nuding Hose By The Parson's Nose
Want a popper big bopper?
You appar to like the phrases "ice cold" and "cold as ice". I can well understand why. Other than ice, it's quite difficult to think of something cold, isn't it?
Too vague, but I like the first and last lines.
It makes sense now, but I still don't see why the stonewoman trades in her tools.
yes!
Whatever tour bus you were on took the short route, try New York, more snowflakes -- less earthquakes.
let him go he seems less than a man anyway if he can't
tell you it's over i bless you with a 10
remember sweetheart! life may deal us many defeats
confront defeat go over it all the way through it and go on. you only live once, but if you work it right,
once is enough. love ya!
i love it!
First verse is good. Last 2 lines of second verse falter some. Last line of poem might better refer to the first line. The seed was that first smile.
Beautiful
Sessile was good, this leaves me cold. Sorry.
I like this. It's unusual and right and nicely done.
This is a beautiful poem...I had lost my Father 12 years ago....not the same as a Mother's love....but it is a horrible loss just the same...my heart goes out to you and thank you for commenting on a couple of my poems ( and you are so right about the comments you left)
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....
Nice a poker face...
Fantastic work! It got everyone talking didn't it? And about Aids which I haven't heard talked about in the media for ages now. It made me laugh and it still does. People need to not take this so seriously and before someone writes back telling me - "how can you not take it seriously", I don't mean aids, I just mean that often humour and off-colour peices are often the best way to get things talked about. Grow up everyone! I think it's great because of the reaction and I'm giving it a 10!
Absholutely shplendid. But who is pressing their ice-cold what into your what?