Skippychew
on Solitary Being by GregDeEgg
4 Oct 2004, 4:19 PM
Beautifully written.
pop
A team of roaches.
Soft and spikey
Lovely alliteration usage.
A bucket of fuck.
emmm, makes me emmm, touch me.
nb 'loonie' is a one dollar coin
what an emotional poem....right now...at this point in my life...I too, wish to remain unsettled...definately a 10 here....
this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....
regardless of their comments....I think it's an excellent poem!
Was surfing through your poems....and this one i really liked...
A pimple written to god-Jesus H...
tHAT WAS GREAT
I fell in love with this poem.
"The love you need is already there......"
Little Cack Horner
Shat in a corner
Eating his turds and gay
Along came a spastic
Who did something drastic
All over the kitchen buffet
I like this!
This is what poetry should be.