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The Burden of Id (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera
Like an electrified Inebriated Flustered sort of saint Twice over crossed by Fated stars To watch life Through imprisoned eyes Tempt me not For I am not To be tempted Restraining instincts So far along and never Close to discovering That which drives us all

Up the ladder: A Blind Child Speaks
Down the ladder: On The Inside

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7764
Posted: October 4, 2004 11:22 AM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2004 11:22 AM PDT
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[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.130.62.63 | 4-Oct-04/6:19 PM | Reply
A team of roaches.
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