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The Burden of Id

Member since 2004 · Posted 4 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

Like an electrified Inebriated Flustered sort of saint Twice over crossed by Fated stars To watch life Through imprisoned eyes Tempt me not For I am not To be tempted Restraining instincts So far along and never Close to discovering That which drives us all

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