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Solitary Being (Lyric) by GregDeEgg
You sleep so nice You're a solitary figure Slumped in half with a crease down your back; Your breath takes time It's a solitary movement Moves the room drifts my thoughts into sleep; Orion's belt Is my solitary vision Stars and stripes and other bright things; My ears burn some solitary ringing there's no sound no sound in this room; The morning light Casts its solitary shadows Growing strong growing stronger on you; I hear your voice A solitary rumble God knows how to laugh after all.

Up the ladder: That Shade
Down the ladder: To Athena

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8880
Posted: October 3, 2004 3:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2004 3:07 PM PDT
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[8] Skippychew @ 206.157.247.131 | 4-Oct-04/4:19 PM | Reply
Beautifully written.
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