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That Shade (Free verse) by Enkidu
That shade of white
The flag that flies outside your door
Surrender? Why fly it then?
The chimney smoke extinguishes
In the opaque sky
And it's white, still
Wind-blown waves of future war
Bending to forever-mores
That sickly shade of white
Turning shadows from the moon
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Posted: July 9, 2006 9:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2006 9:15 PM PDT
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