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At The Edge of Sleep (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
A single tone
At the edge of sleep
Playing over and over;
Singing over and over
Between my ears
where it can never be shut out.
Funny thoughts
At the edge of sleep
Words I learned before;
Things I thought before
âWhat the hell is a ply
and how does it mean toilet paper?â
Silly questions
At the edge of sleep
From the child inside me;
Acting wild inside me
âAre you asleep yet?
Play with me;
na-na-na.â
Sudden answers
At the edge of sleep
When gray matter is untangled;
When my thoughts are untangled
âA ply is a single square
and youâre killing trees.â
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Posted: February 29, 2004 3:33 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 3:33 PM PST
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