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Free verse № 92834

At The Edge of Sleep

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

A single tone At the edge of sleep Playing over and over; Singing over and over Between my ears where it can never be shut out. Funny thoughts At the edge of sleep Words I learned before; Things I thought before “What the hell is a ply and how does it mean toilet paper?” Silly questions At the edge of sleep From the child inside me; Acting wild inside me “Are you asleep yet? Play with me; na-na-na.” Sudden answers At the edge of sleep When gray matter is untangled; When my thoughts are untangled “A ply is a single square and you’re killing trees.”

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[8] Shuushin 29-Feb-04/5:38 PM Reply
hey, not bad. not bad at all.