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At The Edge of Sleep (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
A single tone At the edge of sleep Playing over and over; Singing over and over Between my ears where it can never be shut out. Funny thoughts At the edge of sleep Words I learned before; Things I thought before “What the hell is a ply and how does it mean toilet paper?” Silly questions At the edge of sleep From the child inside me; Acting wild inside me “Are you asleep yet? Play with me; na-na-na.” Sudden answers At the edge of sleep When gray matter is untangled; When my thoughts are untangled “A ply is a single square and you’re killing trees.”

Up the ladder: mundane routine
Down the ladder: When You Wish

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8772
Posted: February 29, 2004 3:33 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 3:33 PM PST
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[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 29-Feb-04/5:38 PM | Reply
hey, not bad. not bad at all.
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