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That Shade (Free verse) by Enkidu

That shade of white The flag that flies outside your door Surrender? Why fly it then? The chimney smoke extinguishes In the opaque sky And it's white, still Wind-blown waves of future war Bending to forever-mores That sickly shade of white Turning shadows from the moon

Zoe 10-Jul-06/4:13 AM
Nice Oriental sounding poem.




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