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Nothing Comes Better (Free verse) by kalikopeli
"Come here and lay with me. I'm going to tell you what my mind feels. What my body wants, Is what you're deepest desires suggest. Turn off the lights, Baby just get undressed and...." Take me, Kiss me, Convience me, Do the thing you do, Lustful sessions, that make it yearn for you. Waiting to convince you, Time is alright. Wanting to assure you, I'll make you come all night. I'll do it best, Good things come slowly. Anxious to undress you, Journey into you. Ready to explore you, Desperate, inside of you. Waiting to taste you, Can't turn back now You make me feel Oohh, electric chills. And you, Offend me, Lick me, Take me down, Let me see. I'm ready to journey, Make you juice too. Give me you, Sweet things you do. I make sweet love, You know nothing comes better I'll be your best, Nothing comes better. Waiting to convience you, Time is alright. Waiting to taste you, Invite me into you. Nothing comes better, Than you. Anything you want, You know its waiting here for you. You make me feel, Ooh, electric chills.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8251
Posted: October 5, 2004 2:21 AM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2004 2:21 AM PDT
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[n/a] kalikopeli @ 63.241.65.90 | 5-Oct-04/2:23 AM | Reply
emmm, makes me emmm, touch me.
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