Re: American Poet by horus8	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.231	25-Mar-05/12:42 PM
Rolls on floor laughing, opps.... Pissed pants, but still laughing out loud. Good stuff. -10-
Re: The Hold Up by luzrheroguy	Dovina 12.72.33.77	25-Mar-05/2:25 PM
Funny. Nice ending.
Re: foreplay by DR Limerick	Dovina 12.72.33.77	25-Mar-05/2:28 PM
Limericks are so hard to use as a means of saying anything besides funny-ha-ha, I'm surprised you haven't tried something else by now.
Re: Cancer by mindsigns	Dovina 12.72.33.77	25-Mar-05/2:36 PM
Aparently, you are speaking to the cancer in "I am your source . . ." If so, the first word should be "You." Try changing "fixate" to "die."
Re: calling by celticskatermatt1	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:05 PM
"nailed" should be "nailt" "spilt" should be "split"
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:07 PM
So I bearded him once (feeling larkey) With a rich Putinesque Oligarchy. But the crowd wasn't wooed; I was fined for two lewds And one Conduct Unbecoming a Darkey.
Re: Sisters of mercy by titan69	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:10 PM
The best part is "pail moonlight".
Re: Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:16 PM
Really? I was under the impression only Americans carry backpacks anymore.
Re: The Narrow Way by Jeremi B. Handrinos	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:17 PM
LOL
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:22 PM
enrapt isn't a verb.
Re: The White Room by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:23 PM
Q1: Would you ever consider writing a poem about an actual experience of yours? Q2: Would you ever consider having an actual experience?
Re: Cancer by mindsigns	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:24 PM
Hey, did you ever notice that no one likes cancer?
Re: The Lying Game by PsydewaysTears	zodiac 212.118.19.34	25-Mar-05/10:25 PM
You were probably like negative two years old when the song "The Crying Game" was popular.
Re: Integration by jroday	Dovina 12.72.9.128	26-Mar-05/6:27 AM
Integrate! Yes.
Re: Integration by jroday	blacksoul 204.215.33.190	26-Mar-05/8:21 AM
Yo dad you gittin crunked up now? You go playa lots of luv.
Re: Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams	hendrimike 70.104.76.229	26-Mar-05/6:00 PM
that poem is now labeled...retarded
Re: You Pick It by durr_T_hip_E	Dovina 12.72.13.154	26-Mar-05/6:40 PM
This is a good story right up to last few lines where I think you blew it. I saw the point without your telling it at the end.
Re: My Mirror by Dreammaker1024	some deleted user 161.184.46.47	27-Mar-05/12:45 AM
touchingly ten
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	evergreen 4.155.240.4	27-Mar-05/1:48 AM
::gasp:: in the best possible way. some of this has been done before, and bits done better, and some of the phrase could use tweaking. as a whole, it's damn near perfect and that's my opinion.
Re: Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams	evergreen 4.155.240.4	27-Mar-05/1:52 AM
i liked it very much. hon,you have to have a thick skin to let other people read your stuff :-)