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calling (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
i heard the phone ring it was God he told that he has a gift for me. i thought about it and smiled, he said" i have nailed my son to the cross" and he spilt hes blood for you. you have to find him my child, find his everlasting love, i thought and cried and prayed aloud. and my heart was lifted high.

Up the ladder: self-righteousness
Down the ladder: I’m unsaid and dead

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11101
Posted: March 25, 2005 5:30 PM PST; Last modified: March 25, 2005 5:30 PM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.118.19.34 | 25-Mar-05/10:05 PM | Reply
"nailed" should be "nailt"
"spilt" should be "split"
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