regarding some deleted poem...	durr_T_hip_E 68.254.156.173	23-Mar-05/12:34 PM
Grand poeme...i love it the way it is...though, i warn, it has potential to be somewhat ambiguous in meaning... otherwise, very creative, witty...superb peace, sean
Re: Cold Turkey by johnnyfontaine23	Mister Cakes 82.152.142.205	23-Mar-05/4:17 PM
If poetry is a drug then i'm an addict. (So is water yes?) So Mr Blair, lock me up a throw away the key cause i ain't quitting this cold turkey. Thanks Johnny. Thats a 6.
Re: Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove	tadpole 24.55.116.186	23-Mar-05/6:49 PM
That was fun to read!
Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	tadpole 24.55.116.186	23-Mar-05/6:52 PM
Dang! I like it is an understatement
Re: the victory by oneglove	tadpole 24.55.116.186	23-Mar-05/7:00 PM
love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better
Re: Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Mar-05/7:23 AM
There once was a young girl from Milwaukee, Who went off west to star in a "talkie", Alas, that her fate, Was to star with horus8, After which her movements were gawky.
Re: Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E	Dovina 12.72.11.135	24-Mar-05/8:18 AM
I hope you're talking about the Rails-to-Trails project we have going in America, where abandoined railroad rights-of-way are being converted to bicycle trails. Revive the bicycle!
Re: criminal by durr_T_hip_E	Dovina 12.72.11.135	24-Mar-05/8:21 AM
Sorry, don't get it overall. Some nice language.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.34.196	24-Mar-05/1:21 PM
Offcially rated -10- From the durrty south boyzs Baseball team. blacksoul, nova, kilo, and link.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	jroday 204.215.34.196	24-Mar-05/1:27 PM
I really feel you on this one D.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	edpeterson 68.252.103.217	24-Mar-05/4:21 PM
terrorist? -0-
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.253.11	24-Mar-05/5:41 PM
I love the "probably AIDS" bit. I can't help but wonder if that wasn't just a bit of on the ranker humor though, or is it something else? <3 Jason
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 69.237.79.64	24-Mar-05/7:16 PM
"Skull & Cross Bon Mots"
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	richa 81.178.191.105	25-Mar-05/1:12 AM
What is this symbol round her neck though. Agree about AIDS, the cack handed grammar of it, that the narrator does not really know what she is on about.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.62	25-Mar-05/2:48 AM
Hey D. It's been awhile I love the poem.
Re: The Symbol by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	25-Mar-05/3:23 AM
When you wrote this poeme, did you imagine the "gang member's babe" as a black woman? Be honest.
Re: Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh	edpeterson 68.252.103.217	25-Mar-05/6:06 AM
Not only do I give my love,but with that love comes patience, understanding, trust, respect and loyalty. wow that says it all right there. -0-
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.6.38	25-Mar-05/7:38 AM
The added lines are, I think, “He is a branch of your family tree that was torn off and discarded before you were born.” I also think that could have been understood from the original version, but those smooth words improve the poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 64.12.116.135	25-Mar-05/9:44 AM
Sadly, true.
Re: Reasonably Good by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.5.159	25-Mar-05/10:53 AM
I have revised it because nobody understood it the way I did. Of all the comments, here and elsewhere, I did not see that I had communicated. I hope these changes will clarify.