Poemranker [most recent comments (13121-13140)]

al-naafiysh on The Symbol by Dovina 25 Mar 2005, 2:48 AM

Hey D. It's been awhile I love the poem.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Symbol by Dovina 25 Mar 2005, 3:23 AM

When you wrote this poeme, did you imagine the "gang member's babe" as a black woman? Be honest.

Stephen Robins on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24 Mar 2005, 7:23 AM

There once was a young girl from Milwaukee, Who went off west to star in a "talkie", Alas, that her fate, Was to star with horus8, After which her movements were gawky.

tadpole on Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove 23 Mar 2005, 6:49 PM

That was fun to read!

tadpole on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove 23 Mar 2005, 6:52 PM

Dang! I like it is an understatement

tadpole on the victory by oneglove 23 Mar 2005, 7:00 PM

love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better

durr_T_hip_E on some deleted poem 23 Mar 2005, 12:34 PM

Grand poeme...i love it the way it is...though, i warn, it has potential to be somewhat ambiguous in meaning... otherwise, very creative, witty...superb peace, sean

blacksoul on The Symbol by Dovina 24 Mar 2005, 1:21 PM

Offcially rated -10- From the durrty south boyzs Baseball team. blacksoul, nova, kilo, and link.

jroday on The Symbol by Dovina 24 Mar 2005, 1:27 PM

I really feel you on this one D.

sliver on some deleted poem 25 Mar 2005, 9:44 AM

Sadly, true.

Mister Cakes on Cold Turkey by johnnyfontaine23 23 Mar 2005, 4:17 PM

If poetry is a drug then i'm an addict. (So is water yes?) So Mr Blair, lock me up a throw away the key cause i ain't quitting this cold turkey. Thanks Johnny. Thats a 6.

Dovina on Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E 24 Mar 2005, 8:18 AM

I hope you're talking about the Rails-to-Trails project we have going in America, where abandoined railroad rights-of-way are being converted to bicycle trails. Revive the bicycle!

Dovina on criminal by durr_T_hip_E 24 Mar 2005, 8:21 AM

Sorry, don't get it overall. Some nice language.

edpeterson on The Symbol by Dovina 24 Mar 2005, 4:21 PM

terrorist? -0-

Dan garcia-Black on The Symbol by Dovina 24 Mar 2005, 7:16 PM

"Skull & Cross Bon Mots"

thepinkbunnyofdoom on The Symbol by Dovina 24 Mar 2005, 5:41 PM

I love the "probably AIDS" bit. I can't help but wonder if that wasn't just a bit of on the ranker humor though, or is it something else? <3 Jason

richa on The Symbol by Dovina 25 Mar 2005, 1:12 AM

What is this symbol round her neck though. Agree about AIDS, the cack handed grammar of it, that the narrator does not really know what she is on about.

edpeterson on Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh 25 Mar 2005, 6:06 AM

Not only do I give my love,but with that love comes patience, understanding, trust, respect and loyalty. wow that says it all right there. -0-

Dovina on some deleted poem 25 Mar 2005, 7:38 AM

The added lines are, I think, âHe is a branch of your family tree that was torn off and discarded before you were born.â I also think that could have been understood from the original version, but those smooth words improve the poem.

Dovina on Reasonably Good by Dovina 25 Mar 2005, 10:53 AM

I have revised it because nobody understood it the way I did. Of all the comments, here and elsewhere, I did not see that I had communicated. I hope these changes will clarify.