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Re: The Lion and the worm. by <{Baba^Yaga}> nentwined 98.148.150.246 27-Jun-08/7:28 PM
... strange. yes, strange.
Re: Da Ghetto by <{Baba^Yaga}> nentwined 98.148.150.246 27-Jun-08/7:29 PM
ouch.
Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined Dan garcia-Black 69.237.237.147 30-Jun-08/8:31 AM
Even better on the 2nd read.
Re: ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock by malpaso Kamikaze 75.20.182.48 30-Jun-08/3:17 PM
A dirge for modern life. This guy is nuts. I actually remember the song he's riffing on.
Re: Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze daggatolar 41.219.199.160 1-Jul-08/5:30 PM
good old rhyme 4 something child-like and curried with adult-chill
Re: Falling Away by Holy Sinner daggatolar 41.219.199.160 1-Jul-08/5:37 PM
simply break thru the wall and walk away into freedom, only that love can not be found outside of the flesh...and all we are not is not us to blame
Re: FOR YOU!! by kristie24 nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:33 AM
definitely one for the pimple archives. rhymes/spelling/content ... hurt ...
Re: Under a better bed wetter by Shardik nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:35 AM
hilarious, but doesn't really do it for me as a poem. goes on a bit much, and while you get kudos on "lugubriously", ... eh. thanks for the cheer anyway :) I know you weren't going for "quality", but there's room for art in it anyway. Though one man's art is another's bed wetting, sure...
Re: There can be only one by Shardik nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:36 AM
definitely has something (situational plot). If you could inject a little more context and a little less highlander...
Re: We can all be free with our legs by daggatolar nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:37 AM
strange. but I still don't know if I want you to go around with your legs open. what happened to good old crawling around with nothing but your arms as motive force?
Re: The United Face of Totally Grody by Shardik nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:38 AM
ow. I couldn't read it. great job of "what the hell".
Re: Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze nentwined 98.148.150.246 2-Jul-08/2:40 AM
definitely something many folks have envisioned with glee. the rhymes are blatantly forced (with pseudo-poetic grammatical restructuring and all that goodness) ... good for a quick chuckle?
Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined Skamper 123.208.6.33 6-Jul-08/4:44 AM
I like that..change without true progress... the word inevitable jars a little with me, not sure why
Re: A rock by nisim2 Skamper 123.208.114.162 6-Jul-08/4:47 AM
quite riddling - I want to find the trick inside the writing and answer it.
Re: sperladnik: the sequel by malpaso Skamper 123.208.66.98 6-Jul-08/4:50 AM
made me giggle a little awkwardly, not quite getting the hang of it ;)
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined <~> 167.206.181.179 9-Jul-08/7:47 AM
ha! thanks for the smile, k :)
Re: Back to the boy in Cornelius Street by Caducus SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188 9-Jul-08/10:08 PM
Indeed.
Re: Childhood Memories by Jessina SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188 9-Jul-08/10:13 PM
Last lines: How poignant this would be if it didn't remind us of hallmark cards and the sweet nothings; words combined that sound good-- and say nothing. Your poem plays hide and seek. Hidden is the expression, while the reader seeks the point of the poem. How poignant this would be: If you hadn't tried so hard to be poignant and miserably failed. --------------------------------------------------- No Vote. Though, in all honesty? This should get a zero.
Re: I know what I meant by Skamper SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188 9-Jul-08/10:15 PM
Hrmm. I'll refrain from asking the awkward questions this poem brings to my mind. Blessed with a seven.
Re: God the mother by Dental Panic SupremeDreamer 68.123.141.188 9-Jul-08/10:20 PM
The ashes are the heart of all spiritual vitamins. Though this piece has a somewhat befuddled nature? So is the mind of most minds. I likes it. The ending could be made into a seperate and more impactive poem in it's own right. Blessed with an eight.


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