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Touching time (Free verse) by winniss
I had a feeling today,
a wind swept whisper that drifted away,
the smell of flowers on a warm summers day.
She touched me forever and then went away.
I see her in the shadows that run with the night,
I feel her in the heavens that glisten with light.
I soar upon the memories that tingle with in.
I die with the words of what could have been.
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Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9736
Posted: July 2, 2008 6:09 PM PDT; Last modified: July 2, 2008 6:09 PM PDT
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