Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/7:43 PM
I absolutely didnt know about the 'Faith' poem in the Bible until numerous poeple bagan to discuss about this so called "plagiarized quote". And I'm not bluffing. This quote, or verse, derived from my father. When I was small, he used to always remind me of this verse. And tells me that the three most important qualities of a human are faith, confidence, and honesty. Also at that point all of the family members, including me, were atheists. We had no clue that this quote may be from some other text. As for where my father got this quote, he never told me. If this clarifies some of the disagreements and wonders, it's my pleasure to explain to the readers. Hopefuly this'll clear things up. Thanks. PS(If you still think that I plagiarized this verse from the bible, and the whole story is just an excuse, I have nothing to say. Go ahead and believe what you think. I've shared the whole story related to this verse and if this didnt help, sorry.)
Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:02 PM
Hopefully this poem wont cause another "discussion" again. Anyways, I dont really think the title is suitable for the poem so I need some ideas. Thanks~
Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi	some deleted user 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:05 PM
Perhaps consider 'Peace And War'? And what kind of "discussion" are you talking about? By the way, this is like another one of your successful masterpieces. Nice.
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:08 PM
Hi. Just curious, where did you get the lyrics from? What song? I find the lyrics touching. Somehow. <7>
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:53 PM
WOW. THis song is lovely. <8>
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/9:11 PM
what's up with the voting/rank system on this site...my votes disappeared
Re: An Unusual Elegy by psychedelic	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/9:16 PM
loved it...<9>
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.17.200	8-Jun-05/12:56 AM
A-B-A-B what about meter? I'm not good enough to rhyme or use meter. [shrug]
Re: Friends? by poodietat	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:05 AM
Given the restriction of the form you've done well. A haiku however is a view on Nature. Hm, well, fucking is quite Nature. The first line is a bit odd. In meaning, that is.
Re: Treasure What? by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:09 AM
It works better if you do away with the puncts
Re: Oh by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:12 AM
Hip. Might work behind the microphone, but for a simple reading it's too long.
Re: Life by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:16 AM
All those long lines, there's no poetry in them. They also tell me what I've been knowing for thousands of years.
Re: From by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:24 AM
Make your big sister stop stroking your ego with Tens, she's not helping you. What I quite like in this Town Hall Registration Data list is the melancholic >>I am from<< repetition.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.164.242.151	8-Jun-05/6:40 AM
a bit pretentious
Re: on my hog by nentwined	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	8-Jun-05/6:51 AM
To be overly technical: Three chambered kabooms? Harleys have two cylinders unless the sound is the 3 syllabled Po-ta-to sound . Yes, the approach is confusing. Maybe you don't need one. I'm just haranguessing you. I should talk, I ride a 95 Nighthawk which makes no such audible safety noises.
Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/7:04 AM
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
Re: Smoky Mountain High by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/1:55 PM
I'm not sure "likely" in verse 2 is necessary. I like the change in tone in the last verse.
Re: Wanted by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/2:25 PM
Very striking. The last line of verse 2 bugs me though. Maybe try something like 1880’s migrant lineage. Also what city is this city hall in. Still I like the moment that's captured.
Re: Racism by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/2:39 PM
-or are we all tigers who dreamt we were people?
regarding some deleted poem...	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 69.231.17.200	8-Jun-05/2:56 PM
skullmaggots?