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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/8:56 AM |
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That was lukewarm tapwater of the finer variety.
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| Re: Over and Gone (Other Way Around) by Miggy |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/8:57 AM |
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You consistently redefine novice. -=o=- Therefore you get the seedless plum.
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| Re: new 1 by Crakyamuni |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:01 AM |
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Forked the toaster
Swallowed the medicine cabinet
Shat in hat.
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| Re: The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:02 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:03 AM |
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| Re: Awakening by Quarton |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
17-Sep-05/9:05 AM |
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| Re: Rapid Eye Movement by wilco |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/9:43 AM |
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I agree with Dan. "Nothing makes the night so lonely"
seems rather awkward. Perhaps, "Nothing mkes the dream alive" Just a thought and a ten by my reckoning.
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| Re: Leaving Song by wilco |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/9:52 AM |
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I can relate. Short but oh so true.
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Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:32 PM |
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What type of poem is this suppose to be?
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| Re: "to do" list:accomplished by razorgrin |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:35 PM |
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I'm not really getting it. Nor am I really liking it.
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| Re: remembering you by sapphire_rain7 |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:36 PM |
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I think this is rather good!
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| Re: Regrets, No More by writteninskin |
Heather Dee 4.178.36.65 |
17-Sep-05/3:40 PM |
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I like this one regardless of your other comments you have recieved. Don't listen to all the negative remarks take anything constructive that they might add and leave the rest of the bull shit behind. Otherwise you will get to the point that you never will want to pick up the pencil again.
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| Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
Quarton 12.217.202.34 |
17-Sep-05/8:13 PM |
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A good narrative poem that tells a story. Tennessee is
a beautiful state and probably more laid back than most. This is indicated by your poem.
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| Re: Dustin by Fire_is_cool |
D. $ Fontera 207.200.116.65 |
17-Sep-05/8:28 PM |
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I didn't know you felt that way about me, but thanks. Hah!
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| Re: Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg |
tadpole 68.64.172.229 |
17-Sep-05/9:31 PM |
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67 |
18-Sep-05/10:46 AM |
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Bought your book! Went to freakin St Joseph MO to get it too. It was worth it to take the time to read instead of rushing through. My new fave? Wigging out!
Love it when justice gets served up hot from mattress dancing! I laughed so hard I had to put the book down.
When's the next one due?
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 |
leonxic 85.37.190.67 |
18-Sep-05/12:23 PM |
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How the fuck do you expect me to get to LA by 7:45? I'll give you a 10 for originality.
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| Re: Dustin by Fire_is_cool |
leonxic 85.37.190.67 |
18-Sep-05/12:26 PM |
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Is this a joke? If it is, than it's pretty damn funny; if it's not... it's still pretty damn funny.
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| Re: My Wish by Fire_is_cool |
leonxic 85.37.190.67 |
18-Sep-05/12:31 PM |
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You know, you can't just paste a bunch of cliches together and call it a poem. This should constitute as plagiarism. I'll give you a "1" because you spelled everything right.
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| Re: Castle in the Clouds by TLRufener |
electroman1979 207.200.116.65 |
18-Sep-05/1:13 PM |
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liked it. maybe someday i'll visit as well, heck, maybe even move there -8-
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