Re: After her storm (draft) by Caducus	jlynnwall 66.212.10.198	29-Sep-05/8:08 AM
This poem was extremely beautiful. I love the theme of her tears with the sea and storms. The only small suggestion I might make is to remove the word "darling", I think it takes a little away from the beauty of the rest of the poem.
Re: The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/8:51 AM
Void=Nothing Nothing=-0- -0-=My vote
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.212.205.120	29-Sep-05/9:04 AM
very cool
Re: pep talk by ay deee	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/9:05 AM
Good one you god damn mercenary.
Re: A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	Caducus 172.212.205.120	29-Sep-05/9:05 AM
You always grab my attention 2nd stanza opening 4 is very good. The ending seems laclustre but then i am over dramatic.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.212.205.120	29-Sep-05/9:07 AM
As the poetandknowit proclaimed ex pimple going straight poet i am sad to see no rhyme. The poems not bad though bar the opening line.
Re: "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 84.13.28.220	29-Sep-05/9:12 AM
Then holy trinity can thus be explained, As a squeeze, a wipe and flush, And like Jesu on the cross we are pained, To break it in half with a brush. Can I ask a question, why are Chriatians so selective in their reading of the 0ld Testament? Why do they like Noah but ignore chopping off their foreskins? Is 'cos Jesus taught us that that was all outdated tosh?
Re: Through Your Eyes... by jlynnwall	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Sep-05/9:13 AM
Looks like a bar code.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 84.13.28.220	29-Sep-05/9:14 AM
You are sad, deluded anorexic. Thanks!
Re: Johnny by MacFrantic	tadpole 68.64.172.229	29-Sep-05/7:40 PM
I would like to hear it read
Re: The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic	tadpole 68.64.172.229	29-Sep-05/8:03 PM
I like it
Re: A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:40 PM
too much wisdom for his age...mmmhhmmmm....it's like they're just popping out knowing everything these days. I like the first half of both stanzas but i think the end could use a little tweak.
Re: pep talk by ay deee	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:43 PM
I'd lose everything after rich red thread and maybe everything after hairy shirt.
Re: A Meadow, Among Other Things by Enkidu	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/9:45 PM
I can't say I entirely get whats going on here, but it has me intrigued enough to read it when I'm dully awake.
Re: Yield by wilco	MacFrantic 207.200.116.65	29-Sep-05/9:47 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry! Picked up steam and ended perfectly. No need to be sung. *10* *10* *10*
Re: The regrets made me voids by Prince of Void	wilco 66.61.101.130	29-Sep-05/10:01 PM
this just doesnt make much sense....
Re: will you? by Sapphire	cyan9 217.40.63.105	30-Sep-05/1:05 AM
nice poem, bit too much rhyming for my (personal) linking, but it was to the point and quickly got a very nice image across to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	cyan9 217.40.63.105	30-Sep-05/1:20 AM
I felt sympathetic to you for having the worst rated poem, since you used nice words and descriptions, they perhaps took over from giving a clear image, but still nothing to warrent the rating I am going to give you after reading that last line, I mean its murder, butchery of an otherwise borderline piece, you fiend.
Re: Yield by wilco	Dovina 162.83.142.20	30-Sep-05/6:55 AM
Dear Wilco, In a hotmail message, someone might have suggested a Memphis drink. If so, she was adding a friendly reminder that poetry is good as basis for talk and cross check of notions like these, which I might add are pretty good.
Re: A Meadow, Among Other Things by Enkidu	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Sep-05/8:05 AM
What bad luck to survive a horrific plane crash only to be chased down, killed and devoured by vicious bunny rabbits. Funny stuff.