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richa on some deleted poem 6 Feb 2006, 4:48 AM
Why isn't this about muslims.
richa on time (3rd draft) by Adriaan 6 Feb 2006, 4:56 AM
goldfish contemplates raindrops on an autumn pond. (13 syllables) I have saved you four syllables to say something interesting.
ALChemy on some deleted poem 6 Feb 2006, 5:57 AM
The last line is just slightly cliche. Maybe something mor like "My heart in pursuit".
ecargo on Sonnet by zodiac 6 Feb 2006, 6:51 AM
Interesting approach, decent dismount.
richa on some deleted poem 6 Feb 2006, 4:47 AM
Doesn't need a title, it's a haiku. 'The' is a wasted syllable in the first line. 'deep' is a bit of a waste too.
Caducus on some deleted poem 6 Feb 2006, 6:58 AM
I think you could do one musically to Summer Holiday or Daddy's home and think the mix of Cliff Richard and extremists is top notch. As you do that I will put peace on earth on ebay with a starting price of 5 pence. Crazy stuff for a crazy world.
richa on some deleted poem 6 Feb 2006, 5:03 AM
I don't know what the first two lines are all about or why they have become detached from the rest of the text which by the way is rather good.
Angelicasassy on (no subject) by whispern_smoke_wisp 5 Feb 2006, 7:02 PM
I didn't really like this one
Angelicasassy on Legless Insecurity by PoeticXTC 5 Feb 2006, 7:05 PM
I didn't like this.
Angelicasassy on Even the elephants by ecargo 5 Feb 2006, 7:24 PM
very good.
Angelicasassy on Count All the Stars by TLRufener 5 Feb 2006, 7:27 PM
I liked it. A bit elementary but still good.
Angelicasassy on Horatio by april fool 5 Feb 2006, 7:29 PM
Pretty good.
Angelicasassy on Sonnet by zodiac 5 Feb 2006, 9:57 PM
Now this is poetry!! Congrats, you are my first 10. Well this poem is!!
Angelicasassy on the inner flame by crwncka1 5 Feb 2006, 7:06 PM
not too shabby
Angelicasassy on Reasons by dancin_n_da_moonlite 5 Feb 2006, 7:07 PM
quite good
Angelicasassy on Cold-Blooded Pillow by drnick 5 Feb 2006, 7:08 PM
wow, I like this.
Angelicasassy on Goldenshoes Shane by dantron 5 Feb 2006, 7:15 PM
uhm, I don't like this.
zodiac on I'm there by amanda_dcosta 5 Feb 2006, 8:53 PM
I like it.
zodiac on An Understanding Woman by Dovina 5 Feb 2006, 8:54 PM
This is an exact description of tonight's "Grey's Anatomy".
richa on time (3rd draft) by Adriaan 6 Feb 2006, 4:54 AM
Is this about how one of the dimensions of the universe is visible only to goldfish. If so I agree.