Re: (no subject) by whispern_smoke_wisp	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:02 PM
I didn't really like this one
Re: Legless Insecurity by PoeticXTC	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:05 PM
I didn't like this.
Re: the inner flame by crwncka1	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:06 PM
not too shabby
Re: Reasons by dancin_n_da_moonlite	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:07 PM
quite good
Re: Cold-Blooded Pillow by drnick	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:08 PM
wow, I like this.
Re: Goldenshoes Shane by dantron	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:15 PM
uhm, I don't like this.
Re: Even the elephants by ecargo	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:24 PM
very good.
Re: Count All the Stars by TLRufener	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:27 PM
I liked it. A bit elementary but still good.
Re: Horatio by april fool	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/7:29 PM
Pretty good.
Re: I'm there by amanda_dcosta	zodiac 216.67.6.21	5-Feb-06/8:53 PM
I like it.
Re: An Understanding Woman by Dovina	zodiac 216.67.6.21	5-Feb-06/8:54 PM
This is an exact description of tonight's "Grey's Anatomy".
Re: Sonnet by zodiac	Angelicasassy 72.40.4.69	5-Feb-06/9:57 PM
Now this is poetry!! Congrats, you are my first 10. Well this poem is!!
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:47 AM
Doesn't need a title, it's a haiku. 'The' is a wasted syllable in the first line. 'deep' is a bit of a waste too.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:48 AM
Why isn't this about muslims.
Re: time (3rd draft) by Adriaan	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:54 AM
Is this about how one of the dimensions of the universe is visible only to goldfish. If so I agree.
Re: time (3rd draft) by Adriaan	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/4:56 AM
goldfish contemplates raindrops on an autumn pond. (13 syllables) I have saved you four syllables to say something interesting.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.221.104	6-Feb-06/5:03 AM
I don't know what the first two lines are all about or why they have become detached from the rest of the text which by the way is rather good.
regarding some deleted poem...	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	6-Feb-06/5:57 AM
The last line is just slightly cliche. Maybe something mor like "My heart in pursuit".
Re: Sonnet by zodiac	ecargo 167.219.88.140	6-Feb-06/6:51 AM
Interesting approach, decent dismount.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.216.6.246	6-Feb-06/6:58 AM
I think you could do one musically to Summer Holiday or Daddy's home and think the mix of Cliff Richard and extremists is top notch. As you do that I will put peace on earth on ebay with a starting price of 5 pence. Crazy stuff for a crazy world.