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fosterch on some deleted poem 22 May 2009, 2:15 AM

And a man who loves the way she talks. But will never hear her talk again. Because she never will talk to him again.

fosterch on some deleted poem 22 May 2009, 2:17 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0YTjrwj7fhI&;feature=PlayList&p=0250E4297F99FE38&index=7

fosterch on some deleted poem 22 May 2009, 2:25 AM

one of the few people i desperately want to be with .. and i'm stuck without one of the few i desperately don't wnat to live with.... live is stupid

Sheeva on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy 22 May 2009, 9:03 AM

Fantastical!!!!!

Freethinker1602 on He who walks behind the rows by Kraven_The_Wanderer 25 May 2009, 6:06 PM

so what is the corn representing? a cult? or am I just ignorant?

Freethinker1602 on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog 25 May 2009, 6:09 PM

one of the better more recent posts, gratz.

Freethinker1602 on Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom 25 May 2009, 6:17 PM

gosh I do love strong symbolism! <3

Dovina on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog 11 Jun 2009, 7:46 PM

Wish I knew the legend, some good lines

some deleted user on Who We Are by Etter72 14 Jun 2009, 5:44 PM

So true. This is very well written

fosterch on Watching December's Wind by dclark 26 Jun 2009, 1:22 AM

You spelled penis wrong.

vulcan on Making a Man by Christof 7 Jul 2009, 7:59 AM

hello dear Chris..hope you're fine..great to see you here again..and read one more of your wonderful poems..you're doing great as before..all the best.

madamefrufru on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus 14 Jul 2009, 5:16 AM

Brilliant, loved it!

madamefrufru on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog 14 Jul 2009, 5:18 AM

I like it. NOt sure about last two lines. I struggle with them too.

madamefrufru on Getting Burned by sliver 15 Jul 2009, 3:30 PM

I like the idea. No expert here but with some tweaking it could flow better

madamefrufru on some deleted poem 15 Jul 2009, 3:32 PM

Love the first verse!

sliver on PHOTO by madamefrufru 16 Jul 2009, 1:28 PM

I can picture her there, in the casket, How sad that you only retained a sliver.

izzy shafer on Home by izzy shafer 22 Jul 2009, 9:32 AM

This is a very relaxing poem.

izzy shafer on @#%$!&* by izzy shafer 23 Jul 2009, 7:31 AM

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

izzy shafer on The Pledge by izzy shafer 23 Jul 2009, 7:38 AM

this is totally awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

vulcan on Lightning in the distance by sliver 23 Jul 2009, 11:31 PM

I just Love the last part of the poem..I recognize the feeling..and "watch that lightning in the distance" reminds me of a beautiful french painting called "Mountain Landscape with Lightning" by Francisque Millet which I like very much..Well done..I think the poem can be developed further..the first part doesn't quite prepares you for the final beautiful relaxation you suggest ..but if only for the finale I give you a 9..