Re: The Pledge by izzy shafer	izzy shafer 71.87.105.156	23-Jul-09/7:38 AM
this is totally awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: Lightning in the distance by sliver	vulcan 91.184.88.143	23-Jul-09/11:31 PM
I just Love the last part of the poem..I recognize the feeling..and "watch that lightning in the distance" reminds me of a beautiful french painting called "Mountain Landscape with Lightning" by Francisque Millet which I like very much..Well done..I think the poem can be developed further..the first part doesn't quite prepares you for the final beautiful relaxation you suggest ..but if only for the finale I give you a 9..
Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot	flames777 94.246.126.37	31-Aug-09/3:41 PM
A lingering heart-conviction of a forgotten secret pleasure in spontaneous lines between creative fingers. Nice work.
Re: which girl are you? by OMOMOMOM	nentwined 75.83.199.99	15-Sep-09/8:38 PM
eh, cutesy but not really interesting.
Re: no title by Dovina	Prince of Void 77.237.86.114	30-Sep-09/2:42 PM
Her words soared and fell down deep inside the blue surface, Then her dreams made it move, Along waves of lights and breeze To embrace The infinity of her beauty That made me a dream of meadows and cornfields in the canvas of her words I will wait under the shade of those words, Till I hear her enchanted voice Till I see her sun rise again Till I talk to her moon to bring her dreams back to my shore
Re: Dovina by Prince of Void	Dovina 68.183.152.102	3-Oct-09/5:06 PM
Swoon!
Re: knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}>	malpaso 70.233.141.5	13-Oct-09/9:06 AM
gotta say: this poem kicks ass.
Re: Aisling of a Shamed Lady by The Bard	The Bard 72.223.0.211	13-Oct-09/8:30 PM
This is my first attempt at the celtic form of Aisling unique to Ireland. Aisling used an image of a sky woman, Spéirbhean, to describe the agony of Ireland under the English. Using a woman when speaking of Ireland is common, by example the poor old woman, An tSeanbhean Bhocht was the subject of a song of Irish rebellion. I am using the form as I know it to express the pain of my adopted land Venezuela. As the Aisling form morphed into combinations of english and Irish, so I have used Spanish, english and Irish.
Re: To Writing by Lifeboatman	SupremeDreamer 99.183.243.83	15-Oct-09/2:59 AM
You know this isn't anywhere near as good as you could make it. Four.
Re: Dovina by Prince of Void	SupremeDreamer 99.183.243.83	15-Oct-09/3:00 AM
Brown-nosing for votes? How sad.
Re: skittles by Freethinker1602	INTRANSIT 173.30.210.145	15-Oct-09/11:22 AM
Reword this in a way that eliminates the duplicities. Like -bright colors-- you have more than once. Trust your reader. We've seen skittles. And enjoy them often!
regarding some deleted poem...	fosterch 173.8.179.238	30-Oct-09/2:06 AM
Way too fuckin serious. zzz
Re: A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini	T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.69.92	1-Dec-09/12:09 AM
this poem is DIRT
Re: No Hitman is a Good Hitman by Spacey	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:27 PM
This was fun, but are you purposely messing up the contractions and the singular v/s plural"nobody"? It is distracting.
Re: Withering Blithering Blathering Wavering by T. Jonathron Remp	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:32 PM
"Menstrual Mongoose"! Hooray!
Re: untitle by daggatolar	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:38 PM
I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.
Re: welcome home by ThePariahDog	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:40 PM
nice play there, it feels like you are going to be angry at the beginning of the second stanza, but then your narrator has surrendered.
Re: Warlord by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:45 PM
I love "drank till my nerves were /wired like an afro". Well done.
Re: Billy Collins by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:46 PM
Wasn't Billy Collins the movie with the English dancing boy? Nice poem.
Re: hi by pete	T. Jonathron Remp 97.64.176.2	6-Jan-10/3:36 PM
Winner