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To Writing (Free verse) by Lifeboatman
Make me whole again I implore you And I dare ask, "Where have you gone? Where did you go? Why did you leave me?" More than a decade I could still remember the last word I put into paper And I still feel that smile Across my sad little face As I put the final stroke from my pen "Why did you leave? Where you ever here before or was I just dreaming" "And why, with all the things I imagine you say I can still not hear any words?"

Up the ladder: Make me feel better
Down the ladder: Mi Pais

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8899
Posted: October 11, 2009 7:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2009 7:02 AM PDT
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[4] SupremeDreamer @ 99.183.243.83 | 15-Oct-09/2:59 AM | Reply
You know this isn't anywhere near as good as you could make it. Four.
[n/a] Lifeboatman @ 216.150.191.2 > SupremeDreamer | 24-Oct-09/6:12 AM | Reply
I know. That's what surprises me. Really, these days, all i make up is crap. But I keep forcing myself to write all this crap. Something switched off some time ago. Just don't know what and don't know when.
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