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Engelbert Humpalot on Flea poem by Sing4Jesus! 26 Oct 2006, 9:58 AM

Magnificent!

howl on Prologue by Dovina 24 Oct 2006, 8:30 AM

Cool. Put in on your gravestone.

Engelbert Humpalot on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! 26 Oct 2006, 9:59 AM

The last stanza gives me hope for mankind.

howl on The Little Mouse That Roared by Wakeboarder20 24 Oct 2006, 8:28 AM

and not afraid to force the issue is so ridiculous it made me Lol.

JAM on The Unforgiven II by alvinb 24 Oct 2006, 9:11 AM

this act of plagiarism has been reported to moderator

howl on Your Eyes by Dovina 24 Oct 2006, 8:34 AM

Good apart from the last line which is a bit of a bum ending.

Engelbert Humpalot on Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove 26 Oct 2006, 9:57 AM

This is a very piece of work. I congratulate you. 10/10!!!

howl on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! 24 Oct 2006, 8:16 AM

This is good. Apart from the last verse. The last verse is bollocks.

Zoe on some deleted poem 26 Oct 2006, 11:11 AM

IWhat if you replaced teh god names with modern names? That would be unexpected.

Zoe on Royal Blades by Dovina 26 Oct 2006, 11:13 AM

Muscular writing! Not sure about the last line. There's a whole other story there.

howl on Danger Zone by Miggy 24 Oct 2006, 8:25 AM

Mature version of truth or dare sounds terrible. I much prefer it with a young filly.:(

Ranger on some deleted poem 26 Oct 2006, 1:21 AM

I'm astonished that nobody's given you the inevitable 'the change will do you good'...

howl on MRS Degree by Miggy 24 Oct 2006, 8:31 AM

She is the opposit of a tack is terrible :( as is the teachers giving her an A. I'd have given her an F.

howl on Crappy by drnick 24 Oct 2006, 8:38 AM

you seem to keep missing the verb to be out all the time. If you see the verb to be as naughty use different verbs.

Dovina on The Pitâs Bottom by Dovina 26 Oct 2006, 1:02 PM

This piece of doggerel is in response to âCrappyâ by Dr. Nick, DND, Doctor of Non-Divinity, Pastor of the Michigan Church of Atheism.

<~> on some deleted poem 25 Oct 2006, 12:06 PM

this is a hoot, DGB. i don't think you need the word "ever" in the last line. that takes it a little too far over the top. great imagery.

Ranger on Consider this by MacFrantic 27 Oct 2006, 4:33 AM

Now choose...the red pill - or the blue pill...

Dovina on # 2 by Lifeboatman 24 Oct 2006, 6:09 PM

I donât pretened to follow this; I suspect that you and your lover are the only ones who do. I do like some of the lines: âMust we to Time's fall fall?â âYet go gently, never in haste. Deny not what you desire to taste. Then shall glee befall us.â âdaffodilsâ âbouquetsâ

Ranger on # 2 by Lifeboatman 26 Oct 2006, 1:24 AM

This is good in places and not-so-good in others. 'Me, you and Solitude...' is good. 'There never was a king who us did rule; society had branded us fools' is not so good. Have a comb through the grammar, and reverse about 75% of the word order inversions. That's what I'd do, anyway.

howl on The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20 24 Oct 2006, 8:23 AM

I don't know why you argue that this poem has any subtlety. It doesn't. On the plus side it isn't too shoddy. I dont like the 'not as good as tv reality' line. I think it would work better if the narrator were watching something specific.