I suspected something different in the beginning. This caught me of guard. Very good. Very chilling!

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Listen here, This is good poetry. It was refreshing in a way. I truly enjoyed it. Don't let the naysayers drag you down. Write for yourself, that's who it means the most to(Although I really liked this one). I think I'm going to go back and read some more of yours. Return the favor eh, tell me what you think of my ink dribbles.

In light of your new poem, this means more to me than it would have by itself, it brings back good memories of Christmastimes I'll never see again either.

What do you mean you gave up? It seems like you still care so much.

Tell Darkie to put it where the sun don't shine. (Anywhere in his vacinity would be fine)

I'm sorry, it must pain you deeply. And the assholes on this site can't help with your emotions. I especially like the line 'love doesn't need words' How telling!

We are here to grow, so grow up and take it like a man.

One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.

Artie? If and when you are done licking his comatose balls and changing his feeding straw... could you get out of the way, pass the salt. wipe off your faCE! AND SHUT THE FUCK UP!? Thanks!

I would love you a lot more if you'd get off my foot.

. TGT AAA ACG ACG GCC AGT. M13-47. CGC CAG GGT TTT CCC AGT CAC GAC. M13-REV4. TCA CAC AGG AAA CAG CTA TGA C. --- Not being versed in genetics, I got this off the net. I think your poem is very funny. Is your code hopelessly scrambled or do you have a pattern in it? Regardless, have a 10.

Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's. Your hair is fine Like January embers My heart burns there too

Hmm, don't like her much eh? Read some of mine, tell me what you drink-er think.

DAMN'I like your Style. Well done.

Indeed, a killer.

Are those amino acids? Or some kind of DNA chain?

you are mentally challenged

I'll give you a big one oh ranking for this high-quality poem One of the best I've seen on here!

POEME, NO!!!!! POEM, YES!!!!! tooooooooooooooo looooooooooong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!