omg.. omg... i absolutely LOVE this one. so beautiful!! I have my new favorite :) awwww

no.

Now it's one poem every other day huh?

My favorite from you so far I think:) see, no chin, just a BIG smile.

This is the closest one to a poem, I still need to read one more of yours.Somewhat thought provoking. I shall bestow an seven

Yea, I've spent my share of time w/Jack too.

Not Bad at all, maybe more would be in order?

Yea, I like it. I haven't been on in a week or so, but I see the top 20 has been totally revamped. I had a few make it in there in their time, I am content at that. You should do one about the anonymous tens which sometimes appear there all the sudden. Here's a blue one for this little ditty. P>S> You know, only the guys who give the 0's are going to dislike this one.

Fantastic, I haven't read any of these yet, I think I'm going to enjoy reading your stuff. Nice synopsis by the way.

Ouch, I've lost a few that way.

That aught ta show er.

Wish I coulda' been there

The leaf is not violet to start with. Not being violet it is hidden (but how does heat hide). Comes to colour in autumn. We see it. This I think is the only way it makes sense but it is not the obvious interpretation. Also it is a million miles from my own understanding of truth. Other than that............ not bad.

There are mistake in the last stanza L2, and S7 L1

Pulp, squish, papyrus.

The last line could be dramatically inproved.

"Every moment it will begin" any moment... "with all the past we’ve been though" through "When I’m not gone afar Problems we never resolve" And this just makes no sense.

That's fucking the best ever "warped depeche mode dildo" lol!

A clear victory. 10.

rockmaaaage......