Well said and done - But am afraid not wortha zero nor a ten. So hows a Ronaldo 9 to pemper your stick:o)

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LoL - I feel your pain. poetically brilliant: "You sad cocksucking, moronic, insecure twats, I hope you find your come-uppance, In a shower of baseball bats." I feel fairly safe in saying that prolly you are the first to rhyme bats with twats. -9-

I have seen, tho' never been to, this Wild Goose you speak of. Will there be more of this story? I hope so.

You are by far, the most interesting single serving person I have ever met. Did I say single serving? I meant Full course meal. With a backup bus of Disco retards. Full boat.

Nah. shorten it to a villanelle for more punch. Judy.

Some very lovely language here. first line in the second stanza would benefit from another poke at - as well as the third line of the last "thought....". nice work. -8-

Pentameter flawlessly applied - Keats or not, well done on this. gonna give this an -8-

Liked ya idean but me think you can do better, cause of that i am bound to give u a 5 :o(

difficult questions; difficult times... -7-

'Your left and right hand are your wives,' no more explanation needed.

I have spots and my finger won't stop stinking.

A lyric. I think a bridge with more detail about this dirty little secret would be in order. as it stands there are some nice bits, but it needs something more. -7-

cats and bugs - nicely done! I hate when mine eats spiders... okay - now. it is about nature - and there is an implied season with the dragonfly - hey - this might even be a real haiku! (as close as one can get in engrish). -9-

Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!

Very nice; can picture the scene well.

We men can be like that sometimes. He will realize what he missed. Perhaps by then you will find happiness again.

LoL! Hey INTRANSIT, did you miss me? all of a sudden I feel sick, I ate sushi this morning. Shit!

My cat like's grasshoppers, It hasn't caught any dragonflies (YET)I agree, with shush, probably what Haikuu was designed for.

Yea, o.k. not