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Painting (Free verse) by Art Glocken painting
bloody painting
what colour?
what brightness?
is there apoint
5years later
it needs doing again
Up the ladder:
remembering you
Down the ladder:
The man who sold his wife
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Posted: July 27, 2002 8:50 AM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2002 8:50 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.3 Overall Rank: 3684 Comments:
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Nimrod's son @ 195.92.168.169
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27-Jul-02/8:53 AM
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Yet again another simplistic approach by Mr Glocken but effective all the same.
What the writer is on about i dont know. To me it represents a wall in a kids playroom, when some brat has put there grubby little fingers all over it....angst-ridden.
The agony of life
sincerity will get you everywhere, but not into my pants (paints) Mr. Glocken???
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
difficult questions; difficult times...
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a point (needs the space).
Yes! 187 view(s)
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