horus8
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 4:35 PM
I want to feel you up like my little turtle.
I suppose saying I clicked on the wrong poem is a little late now huh? Cadacus, I just want you to know I wasn't in the least bit surprised or curious.
Sliver, I know we all write below our capabilities to some degree, however, I really think you should be about 1.5 steps ahead of this. I'm gonna e-mail you.
Death is the ultimate orgasm. It's graduating on to the next level. Why are you glorifying it in this marydor-dom way? Why is your world so small?
Funny.
I wanna scream so loudly I deafen myself
I wanna beat the walls around me till they fall
Iâm not gonna allow myself to be put that low
Not gonna stand for what others put me through
They can judge me and I say fuck that
I am who I am and I donât think I deserve anything less
If you fuck me over I fuck you up
Donât come messinâ with me Iâm too risky
When Iâm done with you, youâll wish youâd followed that bright light at the end of the tunnel
Why is this a sonnet?
Call it "Thermos"
My world is so small becuase i think inside my box lol why eles would it be so small?
stone{d} nice lol........
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They seem to relay a calm
A simple peacefulness.
And yet, deep inside
There is also pain,
and something more.
Like she's lived her life in rain." WHAT! Good GOD man! get the fuck away from her she's probably wet! lol.
:o) but cud do better with the end ( but ill just give u a 10)
Gran'ma what big eye she has - better to let in sliver dear, cause hes gonna write a poem abt her with rain in her eyes:o)
Well lads this looks to me like a gay friend & nothing more, losing out to a girl:o)
I think I would have seen the safe, and understood how you propose to crack it, but having that knowlege changes everything for me now, I think I will take rockmage's advice and bring these words to the mountains with me along with a new book, a pen and a piece of paper. I have my work cut out for me.
Not worth a Zero mate if thats what you looking for but not upto a seven, so ill give u 5.5 rounded off:o)
Not worth a Zero mate if thats what you looking for but not upto a seven, so ill give u 5.5 rounded off:o)
worth a 3max:o)
I have serious halitosis in the mornings. I brush many times a day though to stay minty fresh!