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Sonnet № 75780

Jerry and Jack

by eyrbare

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Remember that night so long ago Jerry came to enlighten us about the new status quo? He said "you little fuckers took the Jeep for one last drive! It's the last time it's gonna be stuck in the mud. You do, you won't stay alive!" He wasn't feeling so spry He just drank a bottle of Jack We didn't think to pry we didn't want to be smacked. Let's just say, we didn't want to get in Jack's way.

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[9] sliver 17-Nov-03/3:19 PM Reply
Yea, I've spent my share of time w/Jack too.
[8] savagelymakeitcount 17-Nov-03/5:46 PM Reply
Funny.
[n/a] horus8 17-Nov-03/5:47 PM Reply
Why is this a sonnet?