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Jerry and Jack (Sonnet) by eyrbare
Remember that night so long ago Jerry came to enlighten us about the new status quo? He said "you little fuckers took the Jeep for one last drive! It's the last time it's gonna be stuck in the mud. You do, you won't stay alive!" He wasn't feeling so spry He just drank a bottle of Jack We didn't think to pry we didn't want to be smacked. Let's just say, we didn't want to get in Jack's way.

Up the ladder: a fat man on the dock
Down the ladder: Just Passing Through

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7566
Posted: November 17, 2003 2:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2003 2:00 PM PST
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[9] sliver @ 63.190.80.132 | 17-Nov-03/3:19 PM | Reply
Yea, I've spent my share of time w/Jack too.
[8] savagelymakeitcount @ 219.165.182.208 | 17-Nov-03/5:46 PM | Reply
Funny.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 17-Nov-03/5:47 PM | Reply
Why is this a sonnet?
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