Well shucks.. this write up got almost straight tens!? you guys, I can never be angry long- ya'll soon brighten up my day always. One of these days one of me pieces will get 6 average.. i feel it coming closer.. so elusive damnit. hope it isn't on this one though lol- that would be too ironic.

may you never be accused of being unpoetic again: "Your breath upon my throat, It reveals your ardent will. Over me, this deep desire, Will constantly spill." horrey shirt, thats good stuff, Swift. You must definitely keep that, the last though... brings it down a notch - maybe burn it? nice! as payment for the glow of that one stanza: -9-

other buch metter probably pulled from your bum; dis one much too dumb.

if you threw out "A stick is" then added "crumpets are"- you'd would have had me sold.. but then again, one must find his own special spice to give his haiku its punch. This one fizzed and poofed, but you'll get better as you write some more. Blessed with four.

really???? ah. I got an answer! Heres a 2.

Seems to be playing up the importance of technical terms. I think its broke - doesn't even know. Arrogance of someone thinking they can work something they know nothing about. Just a diy disaster. To a certain extent provokes thought, but the subject I just can't get excited about.

Hrmm.. well, I will have to restrain myself from tweaking it another 300 times. Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid. Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.

Well- its a good description of your average joe. Liked it alot, and if im not mistaken? A concrete in disguise? atleast to me anyway. Blessed with nine.

Who smokes meth again? Just making sure you know. Whats strange? it makes sense to me, somehow.. love it-utterly enamored by its twisted alienism. Actually? I'm fucking jealouse. But anyone who's anyone knows that. Ten on turkeef. Spuna smells- and my nigger cat liked it.

First ones the best, and a nature theme, I mean what could be more natural?

Grate title? Definately.

toad has a wrist boyo. That he does, but no watch:o)

The lyrics themselves are good, but the la la las, and the na na nas, arnt very necassary. Otherwise good job - 10

wow thats awsome ..

i have those feeling too ... i can communcate w/ that

lol. Indeed, as will your relationship with the house cleaner.

Cocca.

"As I weight this risk I will take." weigh?. Otherwise, decent. Happy gobbling.

At least the wristless might still sing.

I like that movie. I like Ghazals. I licks that shit, and then swats it off the table and shit.