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scitz on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus 8 Dec 2003, 11:00 PM

sweet bro, real sweet

grumpycrafter on ~haiku~ by Entelechist 8 Dec 2003, 5:04 PM

So, this is haiku. It's certainly discriptive.

richa on One Moment in Time by katie_jean 8 Dec 2003, 3:57 PM

Scarcely an image in the entire poem. I want to believe you I do. But its so distant, just words.

grumpycrafter on some deleted poem 8 Dec 2003, 4:46 PM

Like nothing I've read, but I haven't read much poetry. I don't understand what you're trying to say, but you certainly say it in a unique way.

grumpycrafter on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus 8 Dec 2003, 4:55 PM

Expressive poem. I could see the blackthorn thickets and your father removing the thorns. I really loved it.

grumpycrafter on Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003 8 Dec 2003, 5:01 PM

I like it.

Shuushin on The Morning Star by Shardik 8 Dec 2003, 8:34 PM

"I didn't dare ask who's Cause it felt like mine..." sweeeet.

kingit on some deleted poem 8 Dec 2003, 8:59 PM

I have a big little problem...I live in an infra-red world. This is very cute!

kingit on ~haiku~ by Entelechist 8 Dec 2003, 9:07 PM

This works for me-8.

kingit on some deleted poem 8 Dec 2003, 9:10 PM

This kicks!

kingit on The Morning Star by Shardik 8 Dec 2003, 9:22 PM

Haunting little toe-tapper, with violins, etc!

kingit on From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 8 Dec 2003, 9:34 PM

Don't need no shit packed where I'm going! Vilanelle? hmmm, uhhh, villain-ess maybe?- ahh fuck, I give up, haven't seen one of them there (French?) dictionaries in a while. Fun read!

dragonfly on The Morning Star by Shardik 8 Dec 2003, 9:57 PM

Hmm...if it's well past 2, then it's not really a midnight drive. A 9 nonetheless!

dragonfly on Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer 8 Dec 2003, 10:01 PM

I met these two people.

dragonfly on Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003 8 Dec 2003, 10:08 PM

I think subtlety could improve its effect.

kingit on Outhouse by newagepoet2000 8 Dec 2003, 10:14 PM

NO friggin' way this is the worst of THIS site!!! I'm goin ta git shit-feced.

Entelechist on ~haiku~ by Entelechist 9 Dec 2003, 1:23 AM

Hi Richa, Thanks for making a comment on this Haiku. I agree with you that a haiku has to be self-explanatory to work, so I won't try and explain the last line. Glad you got some inkling of the sentiments behind it. Happy scribbling.

darby pyn on Poppy,diamond,s and twoo coward's by The_Third_Isis 9 Dec 2003, 1:24 AM

SWEET ANGST. I LOVE YOUR REVENGE. 9

airmankeg on The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan 9 Dec 2003, 6:20 AM

Great poem!

Shuushin on some deleted poem 9 Dec 2003, 6:41 AM

awesome title pulled me in. the double "her her" - intentional? and "missing live" do you want that to be "life"? maybe, since you use impecunious to describe the jury, you want to say "richer". small nits aside, I like this strangeness.