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One Moment in Time (Free verse) by katie_jean One moment in time
Time ceased to exist
Something happened
Far greater than could be imagined
New feelings were felt
True emotions found their way out
True happiness was achieved
His soft touches on her skin
Her longing look into his eyes
This was it
One moment in time
No more, no less
It wasnât a mistake
Nor was it right
Something brought them together
Something keeps them apart
The memories are still fresh
The emotions are still strong
One moment in time
Wishes to be an eternity.
Up the ladder:
Portrait Paradelle
Down the ladder:
Quiet Hands
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Posted: December 8, 2003 9:27 AM PST; Last modified: December 8, 2003 9:27 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.3585887 Overall Rank: 3328 Comments:
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ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139
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8-Dec-03/12:02 PM
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I had a date like that once. I saw her but for a fleeting moment halfway around the world - and then I woke from a dream. Nice but disturbing memory.
The last time I witnessed a 'moment' wishing? My foot fell off and called me a cornholer.
Scarcely an image in the entire poem. I want to believe you I do. But its so distant, just words.
I wouldn't know, maybe I'm just too ugly for things like this to happen to me. Even briefly. And there is too an image here! Way in here.
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