One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Nov 2004 · 2 comments

Real Title but this thing wouldn't let me submit it and it suppressed my creativity: One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode All over Your Face, Jerk My mom is really mean She takes out her anger on my spleen When I graduate high school, I will pick her up And send her to the moon in a cardboard cup Then I will make a lot of money and Try to financially control the jerks that used To pick on me in gym class. Especially this dude Steve That guy's a serious jerk.

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[10] edpeterson 6-Nov-04/9:02 AM Reply

good show.

[10] Bobjim 8-Nov-04/7:26 AM Reply

Most excellent. Well deserving of a 10.