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One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
Real Title but this thing wouldn't let me submit it and it suppressed my
creativity: One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode
All over Your Face, Jerk
My mom is really mean
She takes out her anger on my spleen
When I graduate high school, I will pick her up
And send her to the moon in a cardboard cup
Then I will make a lot of money and
Try to financially control the jerks that used
To pick on me in gym class.
Especially this dude Steve
That guy's a serious jerk.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3327
Posted: November 5, 2004 8:58 PM PST; Last modified: November 5, 2004 8:58 PM PST
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