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One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp

Real Title but this thing wouldn't let me submit it and it suppressed my creativity: One Day I Will be Made of Electric Swords that Will Explode All over Your Face, Jerk My mom is really mean She takes out her anger on my spleen When I graduate high school, I will pick her up And send her to the moon in a cardboard cup Then I will make a lot of money and Try to financially control the jerks that used To pick on me in gym class. Especially this dude Steve That guy's a serious jerk.

Bobjim 8-Nov-04/7:26 AM
Most excellent. Well deserving of a 10.




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