fevriere
on rules by roses are read
6 Mar 2004, 7:52 AM
I get that pudgy hip thing too.
<An unraveling> That's just what we need. Great Poem!
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a boring, soul-blackening mindfuck. Don't you think?
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a egregious, skull-hollowing inducement to inhale gasoline. Don't you think?
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a spitting, f(a)eces-smearing rampaging lunatic of a kidney-stone-passing. Don't you think?
If any of you at all seemed even halfway open to real critical comments, this site probably wouldn't be such a pants-wetting nightmare from which there is no waking. Don't you think?
lovin it, wouldn't mind hearin more on the topic. Hate the man myself. I realise that hate is a strong word but, we are talking about a man who goes to war for oil. If we could only put that much effort and $ into helping those who really need it. YES I remember 9-11, I also have close ties with Iraq so I kinda know how they feel about the situation.
didnt quite understand that... buti liked it
omg thats gr8
o yur my herO!!! i hate dark angel... she obviously knows nothin boutm poetry cuz she SUX ASS!!!
Why is this not on the best list ????
you hit the nail on the head there.
your comment is not far from the truth!
Nicely lean. I'm a little with Mr Mage on not sure what it's about. Seems death-y more than anything else.
A reference to the female spider consuming the male perhaps? I do like the way it hits the ears though.
One nit. You're masters lack of talent confuses me. I got the feeling the master has some kind of neural disfunction and used to be a great puppeteer at some point. Beautiful and sad otherwise.
Votre robinet est trop petit pour moi. Vous me rappelez Stephen, se reposant dans cette chaise. Et quelle est cette odeur ?
"As I watched her, I looked down at my right
hand holding a forkfull of food.
My left hand was circling my cup of tea.
I looked back at her and wondered why."
These lines are awful. Just awful. The rest isn't half-bad; just change the end to anything - anything at all! - other than looking at your own hands and wondering why. PLEASE!!
DUCKS WITH AIDS!!!!!!
This is not a haiku. UH.
- no comma is needed after "operastar", which I hope you know isn't a word.
- You missed a comma or something after "rose".
- "metamorphosising" should be "metamorphosing".
- "December doesn't close.)" And what the hell does that mean, anyway?
Still it's nice to find one here I like.